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19th May Live Writing Session
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Olivia
10:25
The light from a relatives eyes.
Frankie
10:25
the hot embers cracking and flacking through the rusted gate.
Nina S-H
10:25
my paradise is swimming in the glossy cold sea.
Charlotte
10:25
My paradise is made from a gallery of glossy pictures of beautiful nature photos.
Seb
10:25
My paradise is made from the sun rising and the warm cuddles from my mum.
Izzy SWW
10:25
My paradise is made from the colors of the sunset.
Harry - SWW.
10:25
The fire was crackling with crushed coal and crimson flames!
Fran
10:25
Mine is the sun warming up the salty sea.
Louis SWW
10:25
The waves crashing on the shingle beach.
Isla
10:25
I watched the smoke drifting me up.
Mrs Collins South Kilvington
10:25
Gwen - can you add an adjective?
Rosie - a lovely idea!
Arthur SWW
10:25
I would talk of steaming hot chocolate in a paper cup, warming my hands.
Ollie North Borough Juniors
10:25
White crackling logs covering the red warmth.
George (11) Stockland Primary
10:25
Thanks Mr Walker!
Bispham Drive School
10:25
My paradise is made from pages and pages of wonderful books.
Issie
10:25
A wolf howling at the bright moon
Winnie - SWW
10:25
Hot sparks flowing in the air.
Cassidy
10:25
Thoughts of undiscovered galaxies far, far away.
Lucas
10:25
My paradise comes from the crackles in the fireplace warming me like an inviting cake. I like cakes by the way.
wilfred
10:25
My paradise is made from wispy strands of steam that emurge from an endlous sea.
India
10:25
If I was to talk about paradise, I wouldn’t be on about pretty palm trees swaying in the wind.
Kaya
10:25
My  paradise is made from a crackling red fire, spitting ash from within the flames.
Mrs Murrin
10:25
Paradise is the racing down a rocky hillside on my bike with friends.
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:25
The cold grasp of the diving I did with my friend in Dorset. We got stuck in a storm, surprisingly it was fun. We were alone in the waves.
Guest
10:26
My paradise is made of pale sun rays filtering through the lush green canopy in the warm forest.
Mrs Shirtliff
10:26
Arthur - I would talk - great start, very enticing.
Douglas
10:26
My paradise is made from the hot chocolate at my muddy Rugby tournaments.
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:26
"What is a paradise?" you ask. A paradise is a box full of quality street wrappers; a warm toasty crumble on a cold day; home grown veggies with wonky characteristics and worn down pencils that leave marks on your fingers.
Amberlie
10:26
paradise is my reflection in the bright blue sea.
Bethany Tatsfield
10:26
My paradise is made from the cold water of the sea on my face.
Mr Walker
10:26
Izzy - what colours are the sunset?
Mrs James
10:26
Nina - interesting idea - glossy sea.  I have never used this adjective with sea but I will from now on.  Well done.
Freya pensby primary school
10:26
My paridice is made from a glass of fresh lemonade!
Oliver screen sww
10:26
my paradise place is made of the ho with the navy blue amber sun mixxing with the navy blue sea waves whooshing when sitting on a chair
Stan
10:26
My paradise is made from cloudless skies for miles around
Sachin
10:26
My paradise is made from a mix of wrath and ecstacy
alice
10:26
My paradise would riding on bikes with  my friends to see the new born calves
George Llandogo
10:26
The fire warms me up like toast fresh from the toaster in my paradise.
Chloe -SWW
10:26
Paradise is made from the lush grass swaying with the wind.
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