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19th May Live Writing Session
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Freya llangorse school
10:27
The fish shimmering in the water as they dance through the water.
Frankie
10:27
the hot,red,orange fire ]
robyn
10:27
okay thanks
Betty
10:27
My paradise is the illusion of flying when you bounce high on a trampoline. The cool breeze when you open a window in a hot room. A baby bird's feather I found on the ground.
Mrs VB
10:27
Devon - lovely word 'Azure' - keep going!
Mrs Collins South Kilvington
10:27
Thomas G - good ideas!
Arthur & Carys
10:27
The crinkle of the oak leaves in Stackpole woods, crunchy beneath my shoes.
Abigail Kilmington
10:27
My Paradise is a sandy beach where the waves are clear blue and palm trees give you shade.
Katie Wychwood CE Primary
10:27
My paradise is made of hope and love hugging the world.
frank
10:27
My parardise is made of power.
Fran
10:27
My paradise is reading by the willow tree.
Matilda
10:27
If my paradise lived it would be as soft as a robin.
Arthur SWW
10:27
Trees whispering to one another in hushing breeze.
S+W coastlands
10:27
My paradise is made from life
Eleanor
10:27
My paradise is made from shattered sun rays held together by dreams.
Felicia Q
10:27
Paradise is made from my cuddly teddy's.
Sam SwW
10:27
If I were to speak of paradise, I would be speaking of the speckles of sunlight filtered by great oaks and the crystal music of assorted birdsong.
Raffaella (Felix’s mum)
10:27
My paradise is made from pale sun rays filtering through the lush green canopy of the warm forest.
James
10:28
My paradise is made from the happiness I feel when I drift into a dreamless, numb sleep.
Mrs Kilgour
10:28
Izzy - lovely, the colours of the sunset. Could you describe those colours?
Olivia st Teresa’s
10:28
My paradise is reading in my bed late at night 📖📖📖
Mrs James
10:28
Beabop - Your ideas are great but are they linked?  Could you improve it by including things from Harry Potter for the other two examples e.g. Harry Potter, spells and Dumbledore.
Mrs Shirtliff
10:28
Katie - hope and love hugging the world - what a lovely idea.
Devon
10:28
My paradise is made from hope, rising inside all us.
Olivia
10:28
The warmth from the summer sun beaming down at me
Harry - SWW.
10:28
My paradise is on a hill watching the rusty red sun go down!
Lucy WRPS
10:28
My paradise is the sun smiling on my colourful garden.
Freya
10:28
My paradise is made from seeing a cat.
Mrs McCalmont
10:28
Louis - there’s a great sound that goes with sea and shingle.
Nicholas S
10:28
The warm smell of my grandads cooking.
Oliver screen sww
10:28
Harry maybe take out the and. it will make a really good bit of aliterasion.
George Llandogo
10:28
My paradise is made from the flames licking the grate, and the beautiful sea washing over the shore.
Abigail (9) northmead
10:28
My paradise is the splash of a wave 🌊 caught in the sun .
Bethany Tatsfield
10:28
My paradise is made of a sunset over the emerald trees at the end of our garden.
Louis SWW
10:28
The aroma of sizzling bacon.
Charlotte
10:28
My paradise wouldn't mean the pop of a firework lighting up the skies.
Bispham Drive School
10:28
My paradise is made from chocolate cake on a warm summers day.
Mrs McCalmont
10:29
Arthur, I love the hushing breeze.
Kaya
10:29
My paradise would be a snowy wonderland, with icicles at every corner, and snowball fights galore.
Emma B
10:29
My paradise is made from the happiness of all the joyful times from my past memories.
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