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19th May Live Writing Session
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Phoebe 11 RJS
10:29
The numb feeling in my hands when I've been in the snow.
Seb
10:29
My paradise is made from time spent with my playful dad.
Mrs A
10:29
Olivia - I love the idea of light in a relative's eyes. Which relative?
Hannah from Year 5
10:29
My paradise is made from the warming smell of freshly baked bread, the gentle whirr of a sewing machine, and the worlds you can see from a doorstep.
Carson
10:29
snuggles with Ella the black, funny, cute American spaniel
Theo
10:29
If paradise lived in my pocket it would have great mountains
Nina S-H
10:29
Looking out my window at night seeing the lovely sunset with swirling colours like red and orange.
Rebecca From Brunel Class
10:29
My paradise is made from my friends Poppy Poppy Rose and Cara.
Arthur SWW
10:29
Their would be tranquil lakes with glimmering fish lurking at the bottom.
Jack, Eccleston Lane Ends
10:29
My paradise is made from calm animals beneath the warm sun.
Ria coastlands
10:29
my paradise is my endless imagination as i can creaet my wildest dreams.
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:29
The earthy smell on my hands after gardening.
samuel rogiet primary
10:29
my favorite football as it glides into the top corner
Fran
10:29
My paradise is my mothers flapjack.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:29
Flapjack is my favourite, especially when slightly warm and soft!
Olivia N
10:29
My paradise is watching the stars in the dark night sky .
Mrs McCalmont
10:29
Arthur , have a quick look at their - there
Mrs VB
10:30
Holly, you share my paradise of a Hot Chocolate - do you like marshmallows in yours?
HOLLY AND ELLA
10:30
My paradise is made from..
Freya pensby primary school
10:30
If I said paradise I wouldn’t think of a blue sea or swimming pools it would be made of the burning weather of summertime and spring.
Mrs Shirtliff
10:30
Hannah, I love your ideas of baking bread and the whirr of the sewing machine. Could you add more detail to these? Who's baking and where? Who's sewing, what are they sewing?
Natalie
10:30
My paradise is made from the leafy-green grass flowing in the breeze, whilst the elegant clouds flow cautiously.
Sachin
10:30
My paradise is made from the last bite of a tasty meal.
Mrs Eltringham
10:30
alice - lovely, is there a missing word?
Isla
10:30
My Paradise is the feeling of a successful day of chaos.
Mrs McCalmont
10:30
Chloe - I can see this now!
Emily, Manor field
10:30
Mist swirls around my feet as icicles grow from the towering trees.
Charlotte
10:31
A blanket covering my cold toes.
Fran
10:31
A land of cats, all loving me.
LuisWRPS
10:31
The hot coal burned- fighting against the wind.
George (11) Stockland Primary
10:31
Nice one Eliza!!
Mr W
10:31
The burning bars imprison the fiery phoenix, rising from the ashes.
Jack E
10:31
the feeling of weightlessness when I bounce high on my trampoline
Dean SPS
10:31
My paradise is made of those I loved and lost.
Freya pensby primary school
10:31
My paridice is made of my friends and family!
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:31
The warmth of my grandma's fire as I sketch on the carpet.
Larraine H
10:31
Water trickling through my fingers - love it George!
Holly
10:31
My paradise is the crackle, fizz and bang of rainbow fireworks.
Sachin
10:31
Felicia Qi- Wrong apostrophe use
Beabop
10:31
My paradise is made from looking after cheetahs
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