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1st June Live Writing Session
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Nidharshna
10:21
The cat creeps at night as quiet as panther.
Harry - SWW.
10:21
Sly cat.
Bispham Drive School
10:21
Snow shredder - Samuel
Guest
10:21
This is my first time on the show.
Mrs James
10:21
Seb - silent paws is a powerful phrase which conjures up a very clear picture in my mind.  Perhaps, you may want to change the second silent for another word (synonym).
Amelia R
10:21
It's my birthday.The flying carpet was going through walls like a ghost.
Kobe from Warren Road
10:22
As strong as a gorilla.
Milly
10:22
as stealthy as the moon appearing in the cold night
Evie - JMPS
10:22
The snow cats' ears are as alert as a soldier guarding a castle.
Bispham Drive School
10:22
Spots as black as charcoal - Erin
Roxy
10:22
The lynx is a sneaky as a thief.
Joseph 10
10:22
The claws like daggers ripped open the sheep to get the meat inside.
Zak - JMPS
10:22
The snow cats' tails swings like a branches on a tree.
Guest
10:22
Toby B , Great describing. Claws like daggers
Roxy
10:22
The lynx is the snow.
Mrs Kilgour
10:22
Amelia R - Happy Birthday! Great writing!
Pie
10:22
Florence - I love the image of the burglars sneaking...
Chloe-SWW
10:22
Its claws as thick as two child fingers.
Oliver Pensby Primary
10:22
I love that description Harry snow is so silent.
Mr Burk
10:22
Harry - I like your idea of snow falling slowly.
Issy - JMPS
10:22
The two snows cats pounce drooling saliva over its prey.
Amelia R
10:22
Tilly why don't you add a adjective.
Seb
10:22
eyes like torches peering through the night
Emily, Manor field
10:22
Icy hunter, snow swirler, ground pounder ,tail flickerer.
Pie
10:22
Eliza - a great string of kennings - paw-padder, snow-shifter...
Betty
10:22
Spots as black as midnight in Winter
Tilly / palace wood
10:22
the tail moved swiftly as the body moved silently.
Pie
10:22
Bispham Drive. - you have kennings poem with that list. I'd hyphenate each phrase, e.g., Tail-wagger - as that shows the two words are meant to be linked as if they were one thing.
Mrs James
10:22
Bishpham Drive School and Erin - great description - spots as black as charcoal.
Pie
10:22
Simi - what a new idea - pin pong paddles!
Emily - good run of kennings.
Kit Sambridge
10:22
Majestic , proud race car ready to prounce of to hunt
Chloe-SWW
10:23
Its tummy as white as a blanket of frost.
Clare Bispham Drive Junior
10:23
Playfully, the majestic beasts power and plough through powdery snow.
Melody Summerfields Primary
10:23
as sneaky as a viper eyeing up its prey
Kit Sambridge
10:23
It was as bold as a eagle
Pie
10:23
Phoebe - you've got a good start to your story.
Emma B
10:23
The cat stealthily went through the snow, the silence was deadly.
Kit Sambridge
10:23
Great use of adjectives seb
Amelia R
10:23
I lsla add more - great work keep going
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