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1st June Live Writing Session
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Harry Pensby Primary
10:23
Fangs as sharp as daggers.
Chloe-SWW
10:23
Its fur as soft as velvet.
Sachin
10:23
Dragon-impersonator
Pie
10:23
Amelia - I love the freshness of your idea.
Utkarsha
10:23
I love your sentences Jersey.
Sheesha
10:23
Sachin - I like your idea of Teeth Snapping And Ripping.
Rosie
10:23
velvet fur
Bispham Drive School
10:23
Mindless murder - Samuel
Toby
10:23
The snow leopard runs along the cliff edge trying to stay stable.
Ellie Stockland Primary
10:23
Ears pointed, Tail in the air, he slippes
Sachin
10:23
Globe-starer
Seb
10:23
good descriptions everybody
Amelia R
10:23
Emojis make your writing worse.
Kit Sambridge
10:23
You can see the past of the cat by just looking at the crystal clear eyes .
Mrs James
10:23
Chloe - blanket of frost great image.  Usually blankets are warm so it really made me think.
Sachin
10:23
Hairy- lingerer
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:23
Lydia -stealth-hunter
Ellie Stockland Primary
10:23
Ears pointed, tail in the air, he slips
Edith
10:24
Their muscly legs are covered in thick layer of spotted fur.
Shreesha
10:24
Sorry Sachin that was me Shreesha, not sheesha!
Amelia R
10:24
Love it Chloe - keep going.
Seb
10:24
good description Roxy
Kit Sambridge
10:24
Great adjectives a similes Toby B
Sachin
10:24
Gory-dribbler
Prey-pouncer
Toby
10:24
Not a noise when the snow leopard bounds.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:24
Well done everyone!
Mrs James
10:25
Sachin - why dragon impersonator?
Oscar/St Margarets CE Primary
10:26
The dangerous claws of the snowcat were covered in dirt and ash
Edith
10:27
@Betty- I love your writing you get better each day.
Betty
10:27
Misty, orange eyes glinted in the moonlight
Sachin
10:27
Vast-visiter
Bispham Drive School
10:27
Thundering through the snow - Erin
Sachin
10:27
Not a loyal lover
Amelia R
10:27
Kit add more it's good but needs more.
Sachin
10:27
Silent-stealthy-stealer
Miles D
10:27
Its ears made everything 10 times as loud as it was in the human world. Imagine how loud it would be!
Betty
10:44
Food-snatcher
Sachin
10:44
Bubbling-babbler
Edith
10:44
Mist dweller.
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