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Simi
10:11
Snow prowler
Sachi
10:11
Sorry I forgot my name!
Edith
10:11
The paws crunching through the snow and the eyes sparkle in the icy sunlight.
Jodie- Bowness on solway primary
10:11
The snow cats pounced through the crisp, crystal like snow.
Abi
10:11
The snow is as white as a fresh page, and the cats pounce, digging their claws into the untouched ice.
Amelia.E
10:11
The tale is like a pointy as a sword.
Oakleigh Summerfields Primary
10:11
His claws getting ready to attack at the speed of light
Izzy SWW
10:11
The cats where camouflaged by snow.
Jersey
10:11
Ice hunter as we fly as clouds *digs feat in snow*
Jacob Grange Park
10:11
With trepidation, the silent stalker followed the little boy.
Isla
10:11
There fur were thick, like my archenemy.
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:11
The snow leapers crept through the wild. The snow was as airated as whipped egg whites.
Mrs James
10:11
Douglas - well done for using an image about hearing - what other senses could you use?
Mrs Kilgour
10:11
George - I love your simile as margarine is very easy to slash through. Can you think of something more menacing than margarine to match 'slashed'?
Caitlin randwick school
10:11
i like yours jade
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:12
What did you like about it?
Archie
10:12
They are as fierce
Abigail/Kilmington
10:12
Teeth, heavily polished, waiting for the victim.
Milly
10:12
Their ears are like a koalas paws.
Harry - SWW.
10:12
Eyes like glass marbles.
Emily
10:12
The eyes as dark as the night sky
Daniel and Adam
10:12
It’s tail was as fast as a whip as the snow cat darted sleekly through the forest.
Elsie/ Tockwith Primary
10:12
Claws as sharp as a sword.
Sam- Tockwith Primary
10:12
claws as sharp as diamond swords
Beabop
10:12
The snow leopard's tail following it like strong slithering snake.
Kaleb, Tadcaster
10:12
The fur is as thick as the tree trunks in a Russian forest.
Oliver
10:12
cats pouncing and leaping through the crisp snow
Freya pensby primary school
10:12
Fearless  prouncer
Hadley
10:12
The cat lay on the tall snow covered mountain, It's eyes glaring  at It's next prey. The only sound to be heard was the howling of the wind and the faint thud of her tail whipping from side to side.
Mrs Kilgour
10:12
Caitlin - great that you are commenting on others - remember a capital letter for 'I'.
Oliver (Pensby Primary)
10:12
Fur as soft as a warm blanket, but teeth as sharp as knives.
Amelia R
10:12
A spider venom was as strong as a lions teeth.
Toby B
10:12
His claws were like daggers that sink into the fresh ground
keerat
10:12
The snow-cats are quiet-killer, fast-runner, jaw-snapper.
Kit Sambridge
10:12
It’s eager,eyes glanced into the windy , cold distance
Simi
10:12
the teeth hurt like sowrd
Bethany (10)
10:12
Weaving through trees, they carried on as snowflake-catchers, heart-stoppers, breath-takers.
Mrs VB
10:12
Tilly, I love your idea of glittering eyes and a cold stare
Miles D
10:12
As quick and powerful as a car racing in the Grand Prix.
Florence - Weldon
10:12
velvet soft fur
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