You are viewing the chat in desktop mode. Click here to switch to mobile view.
X
Return toTeachingLive.Net
1st June Live Writing Session
powered byJotCast
Prev Page View Full Chat Next Page
Toby
10:12
The big cat raced, snow trailing behind it.
Sonny
10:12
The sleek rabbit-seizer
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:12
Alice I really like how you opposed the ideas of the cats whiskers
Jake - JMPS
10:12
The snow cats left a trail of trampled snow like they were pulling a curtain behind them.
Freya pensby primary school
10:12
Fearce prouncer.
Jamie- cams lane primary school
10:12
The paws as round as dinner plates, strong and tough plowing through the glittering white snow.
Mrs Kilgour
10:12
Oliver - I like the juxtaposition of the positive and negative images.
Jessica
10:12
Loyalty to one another, endlessly together.
India (Pensby Primary
10:12
The cat’s fangs were as long as knife blades and their eyes were like a dark black hole sucking in visions of crystal white snow.
Anastasia
10:12
Fast Spots
Louie Summerfields Primary
10:12
their coats camouflaged them so well, they were invisible to the naked eye
Sam SwW
10:12
As lively as a heart and dart moth, the two great mountain-scalers clawed and pounced until the intruder accepted defeat and fled, tail streaming behind him
Archie
10:13
There cats are as fierce as hungry tigers
Emily
10:13
Pie- As soft as a woolly blanket
Mrs James
10:13
Izzy - great idea - check to see which word you have spelt incorrectly.  Read it aloud and you will easily spot it.
Emily, Manor field
10:13
It's tail whipped out behind her as she narrowed her eyes against the biting wind.
Chloe-SWW
10:13
Its eyes as deep, as wells.
Utkarsha
10:13
The two cats prowled thinking they are going commit murder.
Nidharshna
10:13
It has a sleek and patterned body.
Larraine
10:13
Good image Jersey - just edit a little and it will be even better - claws and rocket need looking at and not sure about tail floater - a great start though-
Olivia N
10:13
It's sea blow eyes sterd throw the night
Sarah
10:13
Powerful, lean, muscled machines.
George Llandogo
10:13
As sly as a fox, but twice as deadly.
Kitty Wright.
10:13
My eyes would not focus;they where watering non stop and I had to try and whipe them on my paw. I saw the blood stained snow and went ahead...
selma
10:13
The padding snow cat prowled across the white wonderland.
Freya pensby primary school
10:13
Quickly leaping and jumping on the soft,white blanket of snow.
James
10:13
The snow cat stared intently at his prey
Jersey
10:13
Fast as a cloud floating in the wind so hard or like a slithering snake as spotty as a giraffe.
James R
10:13
The chequered pattern: like a chessboard was covered in snow.
Kaya
10:13
Fluffy fur clashed together as the cats played.
Edith
10:13
Revenge swirling in the atmosphere.
Freya pensby primary school
10:13
The frosty, Ivey
Mrs Kilgour
10:13
Selma - great alliteration.
Mrs James
10:14
Edith - great image.  Your writing is improving each time I read it.  Well done.
Mrs VB
10:15
Keerat - super kennings.  Keep going!
Mrs James
10:15
James - great sentence - it really captured the sense of the cat being still and ready to pounce.
10:16
Jersey - lots of lovely ideas.  Give each idea its own sentence.
Mrs VB
10:16
Edith, I love your idea of ‘revenge swirling in the atmosphere’
Sachin
10:16
The growling-padder's eyes were like swirling jars of peanut butter.
Seb
10:16
their snow-white fur let them blend in, like wind against the air
Connecting…