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Isla
10:19
They were as bold as a brass.
Sam- Tockwith Primary
10:19
eyes as sleek as a sword
Freya pensby primary school
10:19
There claws as sharp as a tigers tooth!
Oliver/UCPS
10:19
Eyes glimmering like diamonds
Emily
10:19
As fast as a motor bike
Jodie- Bowness on solway primary
10:19
Teeth like sharp daggers of ice
Ashton - Linton
10:19
The cat hunts silently like the wind.
Emily, Manor field
10:19
Fur as soft as cotton but her teeth razor sharp.
George Llandogo
10:19
Their fur is as white as the snow around them but dotted with spots of jet black.
Jersey
10:19
His claws went into the snow and digs into the holes  he slip down the hill to go on ice to belly flop tails like a magic piece of paper.
Emily Summerfields Primary
10:19
Their powerful legs tensed ready to pounce as silent as a ghost
Mrs Kilgour
10:19
Isla - great use of an idiom in there too!
Seb
10:19
silent paws treading on snow, like a silent shadow
Chendoor
10:19
The silent murderer
Sachin
10:19
Teeth snapping and ripping, the licking-menace gnarls.
Freya pensby primary school
10:19
Strong, fearless snow cats.
Tilly / palace wood
10:19
The eyes gave a cold stare that could kill an elephant on the spot. The teeth are as sharp as a knife.
Avani
10:19
I like yours Jessica
Lily SWW
10:19
The two cats looked at him and growled at him.
Miles D
10:19
They were as agile as olympic runners with 50 medals.
Simi
10:20
their eyes dug into my heart
Kit Sambridge
10:20
Colourful fur
Heidi - Linton
10:20
Eyes as dark as the winters night sky.
Amelia R
10:20
Sprites are as annoying as a goblin sticking post it notes on boy's bodies.
Harry - SWW.
10:20
Night prowler, snow walker.
Lottie Stockland Primary
10:20
As fast as a kestrel swooping down on it's prey.
Toby
10:20
The spotty fierce cat silently makes a kill.
Rebecca From Bunel Class
10:20
The snow cats stared into the distance before pouncing.
Milly
10:20
prowling as silent as the sunrise
Joseph 10
10:20
The snow Leopard's eyes froze me to the spot.
Larraine
10:20
Simi _ love snow prowler as a kenning.
Harry Pensby Primary
10:20
Eyes like shiny marbles in the sun.
Mrs Kilgour
10:20
Emily - powerful verb 'tensed'!
Pie
10:20
James - I like the chessboard idea.
George-WR
10:20
Spots scattered like stars across the night skies.
Emily, Manor field
10:20
Powerful muscles rippled under her billowing fur.
Gennie
10:20
The snow cat shines its folded eyes. starring up at the sun.
Louie Summerfields Primary
10:20
their padded feet enabled them to stand on paper-thin ice
Hannah from Year 5
10:20
Olivia N- I love your sentence! Make sure to check it for spelling before you upload it though. Keep writing!
Amelia
10:20
The cats' razor sharp teeth were their deadliest weapon, and only one swift bite in the neck could finish of a deer.
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