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1st June Live Writing Session
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Simi
10:18
feat as big as ping pong paddles
wilfred
10:18
The shark shot through the water like a bullet from a gun.
Toby
10:18
The cat flicks it’s tail helping it balance along the cliff edge.
Sam- Tockwith Primary
10:18
Tail curled ready to pounce on prey.
Larraine
10:18
Seb  I love it - just needs an edit a little now - think it should be as silent and graceful not as - A great start! Keep going.
Clare Bispham Drive Junior
10:18
Majestic beasts playfully thundering through the powdery snow.
Milly
10:18
paw pounder
Archie
10:18
Their eyes are like pools of ice
Mrs James - JMPS
10:18
The tail reminds me of a hook.
George-WR
10:18
fur-licking, leg-stretching, meow-making cat scowled.
Harry Pensby Primary
10:18
As low as a F1 car, ready to pounce.
Tristan
10:18
The two cats pounce like gazelles leaping.
Bispham Drive School
10:18
Prey stalker
Pie
10:18
Ice-hunter - love the idea
Utkarsha
10:18
Prowler-howler-hunter
Oscar/St Margarets CE Primary
10:18
He felt the raw power of the snowcat he was riding as it bounded through the wilderness
Kaya
10:18
The cats claws dug into the snow as they tumbled down the snow-covered hill.
Emily, Manor field
10:18
As swift as a hummingbird
Joseph 10
10:18
The snow Leopard's skin is as soft as a pillow filled with duck feathers from the duck from Jack and the been stalk.
Aidan - Linton
10:18
The silky snow cat leapt playfully.
India (Pensby Primary
10:18
The cat’s could camouflage into the cold, Crystal snow,
Edith
10:18
Mountain hiders
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:18
"L-Lidia?" stuttered the girl, frozen like a statue. "Yes. It hurts to speak. Help." she swung her leg over the cat and rode of over the ghoulish shadow into the horizon.
Jocelyn
10:18
ice skater
Dean Binnie
10:18
The cat's eyes were as red as lava.
Freya pensby primary school
10:19
The thick, white snow underneath there sharp claws.
Pie
10:19
Children - comment on each other's ideas as well as the adults.
Mrs James
10:19
Micklefield - Great image - with few words, I now know it is night time and you are writing about some sort of cat due to the amber eyes.  Well done.
Kit Sambridge
10:19
The snow cats as sharp as a dagger claws gripped onto the slippery white , cold snow
Harry - SWW.
10:19
The snow cats tail was going swish, swosh in the air.
Louis - Linton
10:19
The tail is like a deadly snake.
Simi
10:19
rabbit chaser
Pie
10:19
Keerat - jaw-snapper - nice idea.
Naomi
10:19
Fur softer than a butterfly’s wing.
Izzy SWW
10:19
There eyes are like crystals.
Larraine
10:19
Bipham Drive School - I love that image whiskers as thin as wire. Could you describe the wire?  Great work
Mrs Kilgour
10:19
Freya - 'their' I think.
Avani
10:19
I like yours amilia R because u
Elsie/ Tockwith Primary
10:19
Whiskers twitching inquisitively, the snow cats swept across the landscape.
Olivia N
10:19
It's beautiful white tail swished through the cold night air.
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