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AvatarDavid Mitchell
9:28
Good morning Bloggers! Today we will be focussing on openings! Listen to David and Pie's instructions before submitting your sentences. Get ready to show off all you have been learning as we warm up to our blog posts!
Guest
10:26
Hi there - Just to let you know I'm here - Jasbinder
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:27
Hello and welcome Jasbinder. If you add your name in the name box then you won't need to add it each time.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:28
Any tips for punctuating speech Pie?
Sachi
10:29
Quick, he's  coming!
George (11) Stockland Primary
10:29
The cat's ears pricked up....footsteps in the corridor.
Rosie
10:29
I screamed with horror...
Fran
10:29
My chest was heaving, sweat stung my eyes as me feet flew across the dusty plain.
Abigail (9) Lottie (6)
10:29
Suddenly, Ivy turned her mum was gone !!!
Sachin
10:29
I woke up to find myself lying on damp tarmac. Why was I here? How did I get here? I didn't know. But I did know that I dreamt I was abducted by an alien...
Sebastien SwW
10:29
It plummeted. Falling from the sky at great speed.
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:29
Erin screamed as the thing pounced upon her friend. What was it? Erin unsheaved her knife.
Kaya
10:29
Before a moments notice, the door burst open and she trudged inside.
Tallulah
10:29
"Goodbye, soldier" Danny's friend smiled as he bailed out of the plane and into the dogfight around them.
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:29
Something had happened, nobody knew why.
Holly and Ella
10:29
Oh no...
Mrs Kilgour
10:29
Oooo yes - Sachi - who is coming?
Jessica
10:30
All of a sudden, the smoke cleared.
Bethany Tatsfield
10:30
"Ruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun!" I cried.
Freya pensby primary school
10:30
Quick Quick we need to go fast he’s coming.
Emily
10:30
  1. Slowly they crept towards the car
Freya llangorse school
10:30
Suddenly the tree lifted into the air.
Issie
10:30
I woke up sweat dripping of my face
Freya pensby primary school
10:30
Can you see him?
Onora
10:30
"My ring its glowing blood red!"
Thomas G SK
10:30
"RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!"
Nicholas S
10:30
Suddenly, he turned around and...
Charlotte
10:30
A shiver ran down her spine, or was it a ghost's presence?
Morgan....
10:30
My heart was pounding.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:30
Adults - if you want to comment on any of these sentences, please join in!
Mrs Kilgour
10:30
Phoebe - I like your rhetorical question!
Amelia
10:30
A crashing bang sounded from the Clocktower.
Amelia.E
10:30
In the blink of an eye, the cat glimpsed the shadow of a rabbit behind him.
Emily, Manor field
10:30
She froze. Someone...or something ...was moving around outside.
Abigail Kilmington
10:30
Suddenly, She was gone...
Mrs Shirtliff
10:30
Phoebe - great use of italics for thing.
Edith
10:31
I ran down the road, but the car had vanished.
Jasbinder
10:31
I knew I shouldn't have looked through the keyhole and now I really wished I hadn't!
Arthur SWW
10:31
Come on, it's getting close, we need leave.
Jack and Hannah
10:31
Crash.. The noise woke Asha  - she sang in her bed. Sh wasn’t in her bedroom
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