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Dean Binnie
10:31
Suddenly a huge monster lunged after me.
Sachi
10:31
Asha hid behind a wall, if she made one wrong move now, well, she did not know what would happen...
Joseph
10:31
A huge beam of light came crashing down from the sky lighting up the London eye.
Jack E
10:31
He knew he had no choice. He took a deep breath and jumped out of the plane...
Mrs Kilgour
10:31
Onora - can you put a pause between 'ring' and 'it's' to add tension? An ellipsis or a dash ...
Mrs James
10:31
Phoebe, great use of an "empty" word - thing.  It allows the reader's imagination to run wild.
Devon (9)
10:31
The floor seemed unstable. If it broke, she could fall in the abyss!
Davidson
10:31
'Pass me the knife,' yelled Luke anxiously.
Mrs Cumming
10:31
It's all very quiet in my classroom. I'm instantly suspicious - what are the children up to?
Mrs Shirtliff
10:31
Jack - he had no choice. Great idea!
keerat
10:31
"Quick! Get out of the house!" Jamie screamed at the top of his voice.
Daisy
10:31
The door creeks eeek ...............
Taha
10:31
Before any one noticed, she stepped inside.
Mrs James
10:31
Arthur - read yours aloud.  You will spot something.
Charlotte.D
10:31
Just at that moment , Asha stopped in her tracks .
Gennie
10:31
I knew somebody or something was following me, it wasn't a fret so what was it.
Bethany Tatsfield
10:31
Max and I ran towards the crimson car while Bea sat in the front seat, watching intently.
James
10:31
Seconds later, the lorry, full of cars,  powered into the house.
Nicholas S
10:31
Omg! Its...
Sonny
10:32
Suddenly, gunshot rang out through the town "Run!" someone shouted!
Mrs Shirtliff
10:32
Great one, Onora!
Issie
10:32
I turned to see it was gone...
Niamh a
10:32
All of a sudden loud bang occurred, what is it?
Freya
10:32
Then it went black.
Freddie @St James
10:32
The car sped down the runway I was in the backseat I was scared the driver hadn't spoke for ages. I felt something suspicious was about to happen.
Thomas G SK
10:32
"Where am I?"
Kaya
10:32
My hair was standing up and sweat dripped down my face. I started to calm down, and I thought we were safe. I turned around, and my skin turned pale. I screamed.
Arthur SWW
10:32
A light flicked on in the corridor... it was close... too close.
Lucy WRPS
10:32
Her eyes went blank and nothing could bring her back now.
Emma B
10:32
Who is he?! What does he want?!
LuisWRPS
10:32
The footsteps where getting louder...
Mrs Kilgour
10:32
Keerat - I wonder why they need to get out so fast?
Freya pensby primary school
10:32
My lungs are beating as fast as a cheater.
Jasbinder
10:32
Liked Onora's why is the ring glowing red...I want to know
Isla
10:32
I stopped and yelled in scare.
Larraine H
10:32
'I wish I could tell you but I daren't,' ...
Mrs Shirtliff
10:32
Keerat - why do they have to get out of the house so fast? Exciting!
Mrs James
10:32
Sonny - very powerful to have a gunshot ringing out.  Try and use shorter sentences for impact.
Sachi
10:32
Replying to Mrs Kilgour; a villan(dun dun duuuuuuuuun)
CJ of CJS
10:32
I saw granite pillars surfacing from a rocky hilltop with arches joining them with elaborate carving. Someone came up with it and cast a fireball down the uneven path. “Run!!!” Avear opened his eyes, staring blankly at the Royal Guard. “Come on, run.” He finally registered the sentence. He grabbed his sword and scabbard. What was wrong?
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