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Valentina - Hedon Primary
9:15
Lucy ran down the alley way, scared and terrified.                               She could her the running feet of the gang.
Rhianna
9:15
Jake stumbled over the hills into the square, the city was empty  he ran and ran but there was no time left and he knew he wasn't going to make it .
Emma
9:15
She screamed, a tall body painted man walked out from between the statue and slowly walked towards Emma with a bow and arrow...
Macy- River Mead
9:15
River turned, he turned to see the horrid, most terrifying deed someone could possibly do...
John - Lancaster
9:16
Louie - great opening. What happens next/
Mr Simpson Summerfields
9:16
Olivia - abandoned, ancient..alliteration - well done!
Ollie Summerfields
9:16
Ollie sped down the road while the humongous towers where collapsing metres behind him.
MrG
9:16
Valentina. How did the running feet sound?
Guest
9:16
A young man named Eren went on holiday to a place that looked majestic yet mysterious
Eden - Summerfields
9:16
Estella carefully stepped into the run-down building, her hand shaking as she reached for the door handle. The door creaked as it slowly crawled open, then Estella heard a grunt..."Hello?" she called "Is anyone there?"
Bailey-Belmont.
9:16
Bobby ran through the sand
Rio Belmont emporium
9:16
Timmy darted,knocking over goods of expensive jewellery, antiques and very old statues.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
9:16
through the darkened tunnel - Hayden a great location choice!
Ethan and Alberto
9:16
the lighting bolt revealed a huge one eyed freak of a monster
Guest
9:16
The derilict sandy house fell over Jimmy
Guest
9:16
All of a sudden, the door menacingly shut
Taylor
9:16
Elliot screamed. The storm was coming.
MrG
9:17
Bailey. How was he feeling when he ran through the sand?
Harry summerfiel primary
9:17
The sun beamed down, there was only one way to escape. He dived with a huge splash into the water.
John - Lancaster
9:17
Ollie - stronger verb than collapsing? Describe the scene - dust? Noise?
Ryee summerfields
9:17
Then someone in a car came speeding round the bend.
Dawson-Belmont
9:17
Cameron was in a hail storm until a massive piece of ice hits inches away from him.
Hollie
9:17
Ellie stood in the forest frightened to death.To make things even more scary the forest started to make strange noises, what was going to happen next...
Olivia, summerfields
9:17
It wasn't a crocodile it was a spider!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mayzee - Hedon Primary
9:17
Tim ran, but suddently a big gust of wind slapped him across the face!
Toby
9:17
It was an abandoned city on a sunny day an adventurer went there his name was Jack he looked in the distance there was a storm but it wasnt a normal storm it was a BIG COLOSAL AND TERRORISING STORM it was coming fast Jack ran into a derilict house and then a big flash and Jack went unconsious...
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9:18
Big or colossal? Which sounds better as they both mean big?
Miss Agar- Hedon
9:17
Mayzee- good personfication!
Mr Hackett- Beecroft
9:17
Ruby- I like the one word sentence for suspense. What could happen next?
John - Lancaster
9:17
Ethan and Alberto - describe the monster.
9:18
Olivia - 1 exclamation mark, please!
libby hedon
9:18
Picking up the dust the wind ran down the dark street.
Nadia-River Mead School
9:18
Kasia ran into an abandoned building, not knowing where she was. The clouds above her, above the roof billowed closer becoming an serpent out of emerald, green clouds aren't green are they? There was no time for questions because a skin prickling scream could be heard over the nosiness of the strangers. Everything was quiet for a split second, untill someone yelled: "THERE'S A DEAD BODY!"
Emma Hedon
9:18
The last time she was here the city was alive but then...
Lauren and Brooke- beecroft
9:18
Emma - It was a bright, sunny day and Emma was playing with her friends at the park and and she saw something strange in the bushes
fshepherd river mead school
9:18
Dave saw the figure move in the shadows.
Harry summerfiel primary
9:18
Coral was dead and they was no sign of fish. He saw the village explode behind him.
Aaron
9:18
It was the place he’d feared.
Jessica Hedon
9:18
Daniel was in a small street, as the storm began.
Jack-Hedon
9:18
Jack stared up and saw a towering city, It was full of large red buildings and narrow paths.Then he looked behind him and saw more buildings on a hill. One higher then the other, they looked like they were going to be as tall as a skyscraper.
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