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Aaron
9:18
....and now he’d arrived! We’re the tales true?
Valentina - Hedon Primary
9:18
The running feet sounded like the pattering of the rain. They ran past. She let out a sigh of relief the shadows stole her.......
Carlin
9:18
He glanced at the door he turned around and ran as fast as he could
Benjamin - Hedon
9:18
Joe bolted into the market place, faster then he had ever ran before. The clouds were chasing him... He looked around, ruined buildings towered over him. Some were totally destroyed with rubble every where. A small shack had been made out of old stands. Without thinking, he ran inside and fell in the darkness...
Riley bartlett river meed
9:18
The gap was too big and the dead people of the broken down city closed in it was now or never and he new it .
John - Lancaster
9:18
Toby - you don't need capitalised letters in the middle of a sentence.
Yustas Emporium
9:18
Jeriah made the perfect O. He looked through the window and saw a storm with a slight mist of rain. He knew the storm would devastate the whole harvest. He decided to run outside and protect the harvest they have been prepearing for about 1 month.
Mr Hackett- Beecroft
9:18
Ethan and Alberto- could you use a synonym for huge?
Ryee summerfields
9:18
Jeff jumped onto the back of the car and then the car drifted around to the docks.
Tegan - Rivermead
9:18
She ran into the nearest building, before she got caught in the storm... This was her last hope. She had nowhere else to go.
Miss Agar- Hedon
9:18
Ben- I love "towered over him".
Dawson-Belmont
9:18
kian had been in a basement,something loud had been heard and he sees what happens next.
Lexi Belmont
9:19
Jimmy turned around and then there was some one dressed in black ready to attack.
Emily summerfields
9:19
She walked back wards tripping up on a rock behind her, she scrabbled away from the man desperate to get away...
Bailey-Belmont.
9:19
Timmy awed at the jewellery gleaming in his polished glasses reflecting in the sun.
Kiara
9:19
He awoke. Everything was gone. No one was here. Did they leave him? He needed to find out what was happening.
Louie Summerfields
9:19
Daniel was laying in sand covering him self in sand hoping the men would give him up hoping he could go home.
Milly
9:19
Toby i like yours
AvatarTeaching Live
9:20
What did you like about it Milly.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
9:19
Eden - her hand shaking as she reached for the door handle - great suspense here -why?
9:20
Emily - scrabbled is a great word. Well done!
John - Lancaster
9:20
Valentina - check the punctuation. She let out a sigh of relief as the shadows stole her....... Great sentence!
Ethan and Alberto
9:20
It has: a huge horn, one bulging red eye and four massive hooves.
Oakleigh Summerfields
9:20
It started cracking and crumbling, it broke free and poked a spear at his neck.
Sienna and Stef-Beecroft
9:20
Diana stood in abandoned room, she felt like the dull grey walls were closing in on her, squashing her to death...
Kian
9:20
It was midnight and Gavin was stood there. He was inside of an abandoned city. All there was was derelict old city buildings and dark, scary allys.
libby hedon
9:20
He ran down the street trying not to get sucked up by the power full wind.
Rhianna
9:20
Jake stumbled over the hills into the square, the city was empty he ran and ran but there was no time left and knew he wasnt going to make it the next minute he was dead.
fshepherd river mead school
9:20
Dave saw the orange slightly move with no one to be seen.
Ryee summerfields
9:21
The car skidded onto a bout and then the boat left the docks.
Tan,Evie and Carlin
9:21
David glazed at the archaic city towering above him like a giant.
Mayzee - Hedon Primary
9:21
Tim felt the burn on his cheek, like a blow torch against his face.
Lauren and Brooke- beecroft
9:21
Emma looked behind the bushes and saw a lost black cat that she saw the name Tabby on its collar
Taylor
9:21
He started to run.  He didn't get very far but then there was jump. He couldn't make the jump but he knew he had to try.
Rhianna
9:21
Nadia I love your description
Antonella - Beecroft
9:21
While the city was pouring  with rain, he heard a small chant telling him to not come forth
Carlin
9:21
he gasped he could not breathe he turned right and saw gloomy eyes staring at him
Ollie Summerfields
9:21
Ollie was only seconds from getting crushed by the massive towers.
Eden - Summerfields
9:21
Celestia climbed to the top of the tower of rocks, looking down on the town as she did. Crackle. Pop. She turned round to see a raging fire behind her. There was no way off of that rock, other than to jump.
Macy- River Mead
9:21
Once the tranquillity had broken, Sofia took a deep breathe. She knew what she done was wrong. She had to fix it and make it right.
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