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Alfie Emporium
9:21
Elijah covered himself in sand burying himself trying to get away from the man, trembling he continues
Harry summerfiel primary
9:21
Gorge looked into the darkened pathway. He saw someone with heavy cargo. Walking into a midnight black building.
Ellis
9:21
Tyrone ran into an ally but it was a dead end the creature cornerd him
Ethan and Alberto
9:21
The collossal monster lowered his head and ran full speed and knocked him self out with the impact
Rio Belmont emporium
9:21
Jake Paul walked around the deserted village, looking for somewhere to sleep for the night. There was somewhere it was a little hut. Jake Paul had sunglasses which reflected in the sun it was blinding. He seen someone. Who was it...
Mr Simpson Summerfields
9:21
Taylor - He couldn't make the jump but he knew he had to try.
That's a great sentence Taylor - it makes it clear how desperate he was to get away!
Valentina - Hedon Primary
10:10
As the shadows stole her she reached in her pocket to find..... it was gone. She knew they had took it and she was in trouble.
Lauren and Brooke- beecroft
10:10
Emma heard a cackle behind her. She turned around to she a lady with a pointy nose, green skin and a pointy hat
Macy- River Mead
10:10
spooky ellis
Kiara
10:10
As he was investigating he saw something in the corner of his eye. He knew it! But how? He followed it.
Alfie Emporium
10:10
Elijah buried himself in the sand, trembling he continues...
Emily summerfields
10:10
The man was getting closer and closer, it was impossible to get away two building were in her way and if she ran towards the man, that would probably be messy!!
Taylor
10:10
Thank you Mr Simpson
Riley bartlett river meed
10:10
He jumped but fell it must be about 1000 meters because he hadn't hit the ground yet but at that second some thing grabbed his hand  and he stopped falling ..........................
Emily summerfields
10:10
Rio Belmont emporium- lovely language and description!! Well done!!
Lexi Belmont
10:10
Rio I really liked your description
Hayden, Summerfields
10:10
I love that one Rio!!
Emily summerfields
10:10
Ethan and Alberto - i love 'colossal' and 'impact' but remember full stops!!
Sienna and Stef
10:10
Diana stood as still as a statue watching the city with evil in her dark eyes as the old building crumbled down onto her innocent  mum. She started to laugh with a selfish smile on her dull, pale face.This was her plan all along....
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10:11
Well done everyone! Some wonderful sentences.
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