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Gregory SPS
10:30
I can imagine people exactly 2 meters away from each other on the street.
Shreesha
10:30
I can see sun's rase falling on me and moon's cheese raining from space.
Harry Summerfeilds
10:30
i can see brilliant blue cars and a vibrant red train
Ollie Summerfields
10:30
I can see diggers  destroying buildings with their massive claws
Rylee summerfileds
10:30
i can see a flock of pidgins flying.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary
10:30
Edith- I love them like ghosts
Srijan:CVEACT primary academy
10:30
I can see decrepit buildings standing old and weary, their foundations screaming and dust showering the ground as the mighty towers struggled to stand upright.
Mrs Carr Warren Road
10:30
Zack what vivid imagery! Can you evoke the same feeling without having to use the I... structure at the start?
Ted K.B Lionel Primary School
10:30
I can smell old pants that people are wearing.
William Westfield Primary School
10:30
I can see the cars moving swiftly around the corners and roads.
Lucy
10:30
I can smell the salty smell of the sea splashing in the wind🏖🏝
George-WR 5A
10:30
I can see birds fly over the mountain-like skyscraper.
Dean Binnie
10:30
I can hear lots of people shouting from the old flats across the road.
Mrs James
10:30
Pen Pen - This sentence could be the start of a great story.  I wonder why you were hanging out the window.  Were you like Nik and Norva, a detective, observing the local residents?
amanda
10:30
I wonder whether the people down there, ever look up here?
Lyla Micklefield 6M
10:31
I wish we could get people over so that we could go explore in the woods,
Gennie
10:31
I can see momountains of buildings that never seem to end stretching out into the distance.
Nathan Sacred-Heart Battersea
10:31
I can see trains passing by like giant bullets.
Mrs Carr Warren Road
10:31
Bethan I really enjoy how you have taken an urban image but created the atmosphere of a setting concerned with nature and possibility.
Buster SwW
10:31
I can hear the car wizzing by in a rush to work, I can smell fuel from the cars that race. I can see the skyscraper ruling the city, it’s iron reflecting over the city
Kit -Weldon ce primary school
10:31
I can a clap every week that gives me a warm heart
Olivia.O Lionel Primary School
10:31
I regret coming the buildings here are so dull and grey here it's very boring.-_-
Ted K.B Lionel Primary School
10:31
I can smell the desgusting rubbish truck coming through.
Samantha
10:31
I wish I could run back home I hate this place. The towering cities the hustle and bustle. So different from my village. Instead of trees swaying in the wind I hear skyscrapers stopping the flow of wind. I feel pollution and smoke all over the city I want to go back.
Mrs James
10:31
Ju-Ah you're very welcome.
Amelia R Home Lingfield primary
10:31
Kit add more amazing
Devon (9)
10:31
They made metal trees, painting them in vain hope that people are not claustrophobic.
Rosa
10:31
I regret coming here, the smells, the sights, the sounds, even the food tastes of pollution. But there was no turning back now........
Ted K.B Lionel Primary School
10:31
Thank you Mrs Kilgour!
Harry Pensby Primary
10:31
I wish I could actual drive 'cause I love the feeling of going fast and I like the feeling of that kind of G-force it makes me happy.
Theo Norton Fitzwarren
10:31
I can see the glorious tottenham hotspur stadium and the players walking out onto the pitch
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:31
diggers  destroying buildings with their massive claws - Ollie this is a great image - well done!
theo bowness on solway primary
10:31
I  wonder why cars are so loud and how many fumes fly up infront of me like a feather.
Edith
10:31
I wonder if the man that gave me the pocket watch will be going to work like every on ells.
Olivia.O Lionel Primary School
10:31
I regret getting too much candy here!
Amelia R Home Lingfield primary
10:31
Sachi add more
Mrs James
10:31
Rosa, great sentence.  It really shows the emotion of the main character.
Tilly Palace Wood
10:32
The winding fog glided through the cars, tickled the top of the buildings and stretched through the busy streets.
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:32
India I loved your feeling sick from the cake sentence. Maybe you could improve it by saying something like I felt sick from the cake, but I hadn't eaten much. Then it makes you wonder what was it that made you feel sick.
Olivia.O Lionel Primary School
10:32
I regret moving to the town.-_-
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