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4th June Show
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Larraine Harrison
10:17
Caitlin randwick school - a good start but edit the spelling - what did he shout and how?
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:17
Edith turned round, not quite believing what she had just heard the boy say.....
Mrs James
10:17
Sebastien - forced a smile is a very powerful phrase.
Olivia.O Lionel Primary School
10:17
James has been in an argument
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:17
Has or had?
Mrs Kilgour
10:17
Luis - fabulous - 'gnarled wrinkles'. Why did they grow bigger - can you extend that?
George Llandogo
10:17
With her joyful face, it was hard to see her so upset
Abigail/Kilmington
10:17
Mrs Edward woke up, making everyone jump.
Lily SWW
10:17
Susan opend her eyes in suprise.
Sachin
10:18
Mrs Cangulu's silver hair drapes down her spine, her prune skin drooping from her double chin.
Izzy SWW
10:18
Margret's fist clenched, she was ready to fight.
Megan
10:18
Mrs bird said mysteriously to Emma''The world has many secrets, you are holding it in your palms. Good Luck...''
Rosie SwW
10:18
Miss octopus chucked her toys slamming the door closed.
Jamie- cams lane primary school
10:18
In the dead of night, the light caught the glisten in her eyes as she turned slowly to face me, the pain written on her face.
Pen Pen
10:18
Mrs F. Hilling whispered carefully to her neighbour, Izzy who had thumped on her front door, "Please help me!"
Devon
10:18
Miss Julia turned around gradually, staring at me with her mouth wide open.
Shreesha
10:18
Mrs Latter held my hand still, slapped me and said, " You go away"
Alice
10:18
Mrs Sheba flicked her lifeless eyes in my direction. “Get away little ‘un. There’s danger about.” Sam pulled up his grey hoody like a shield.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:18
I love the hood being used like a shield! Well done.
Douglas
10:18
Mrs. Greging had wrinkles all over her face but she was very scary!
Mrs Kilgour
10:18
Micklefield Year 6 - great juxtaposition of the two ideas.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:18
I could tell by the look in Flame's face that he had no intention of doing what he was told.
Zack West Field
10:18
Mrs goggin turned around slowly, glancing into my lonely lost soul
CJ
10:18
Mrs Pullman stared at me, “No joke, Dylan. The world will blow up unless you stop it.
Melody - Summerfields
10:18
Alex looked at me with a face of hurt, he ran up the stairs shouting, then, the slammed his door without another word.
Larraine Harrison
10:18
LuisWRPS - love the gnarled wrinkles growing bigger and the name of the character. Wonder why they grew bigger
MrG Emporium
10:18
She stared. Her eyes burning in anger. She might not be able to move very fast, but she would get hold of that boy- one day!
Lucas Swann
10:19
Jack had hair like curling flames escaping from under the hood of his jacket.
Mrs James
10:19
Oliver - I like the idea of the grin spreading out on Lucy's face.  Try and give each idea its own sentence.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:19
Isla - very funny - well done!
keerat
10:19
Granny T snarled at me "What are you doing in my house?" she pushed me out of the old creaky room and slammed the door .
Oliver Pensby Primary
10:19
She feels an intense surge of anger bubbling in her insides, like a ticking bomb.
Oscar
10:19
Joe stared into the distance trying to see somthing
Keith Westfield School
10:19
Harry stared into your eyes trying to read you.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary
10:19
Posing for a brutal kick, he watched the knight lower his hood. Suddenly, his face creased into a frown, "James?" he asked in disbelief...
Emily W Summerfields
10:19
Ms Figgin's eyes welled with tears as she slowly looked at the husbands picture
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:19
Kailen - remember punctuation!
Anastasia Class 3
10:19
Brave stead at the waterfall and started to cry into her grey hoody.
Harry - SWW.
10:19
Mrs Beggins stared at the door thinking someone will burst in and say happy birthday.
Melissa
10:19
"I want to go home" cried Mrs Ricket, looking through the window longingly.
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