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Phoebe 11 RJS
10:19
Then, she turned. She grit her teeth and said, biting back tears, "Get out!" and tears ran down her face. Her kind face contorted into something horrible.
Larraine Harrison
10:19
Sebastien - forced a smile is intriguing - wonder why
Archie westfield primary school
10:19
Marc stared into the distance stroking his chin then opening his mouth to talk.
Mrs Kilgour
10:19
Lucas - great simile. What is his character like? Does it match his appearance?
Rosie
10:19
Ginger felt that his heart would burst!
Kit Sambridge
10:19
Kathryn eyes screwed up like a piece of paper .
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:19
Melody - well done for adding the ending.
Sachin
10:19
Licking the dried yogurt from her chin, Maudie stared at the old woman, edging towards her.
Harry Pensby Primary
10:19
Jeff was always in the dark, and when he was in the sun he had his hood up.
Freya llangorse school
10:20
Max had crept away from his parents to see Old Mrs White about the secret.
OliverD
10:20
Miss Picklebottom stormed out the room cursing Lucy.
Ollie SummerFields
10:20
Mrs Figen stared  at me with her crinkly eyes
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:20
Carmine turned round slowly, her back arching as she did so. What she saw made her deep brown eyes widen and tears welled up. She started to quiver. Slowly, ever so slowly, she shook her head, her teared up eyes begging for mercy.
Shreesha
10:20
Sabastien SwW- Name the character. Who is she?
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:20
Great response Shreesha!
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:20
Melissa - longingly - great adverb!
Mrs Kilgour
10:20
Harry - why is he always in the dark? Can you go on to tell us more about his character?
Mrs James
10:20
Sachin - this has clearly painted a picture of Maudie.  She seems a very confident character.
Chloe-SWW
10:20
Miss tart jumped. 'Why an earth did you let your hair grow! And how tall you've grown! Last time you were three- 'thirteen' 'and now your eight!' 'eighteen.'
Rylee summerfileds
10:20
Mrs tree walked over to me and raised a eyebrow.
Eleanor
10:20
Oliver had hair as red as the darkest flames.
Onora
10:20
Kirsty was sad her parents had died a few years ago she had never so sad I went up to her she glanced at me with anger in her eyes ...
Sam Upton St Leonards
10:20
Mrs Guddgy's eyes gleamed like diamonds.
Tilly
10:20
The old women sat their with a cold stare that cold kill an elephant. The child’s hair was frilly and a frightful mess.
Miss Hunt - WHPS
10:20
James was nervous, his hood placed precisely on his forehead, his curly locks drooped down onto his face as he held tightly onto the cuff of his jumper...
Sofia W
10:20
Mrs Silver stared at me with a stern look on her face, I didn't dare to breathe.
Ted K.B Lionel Primary School
10:21
Her eyebrows deepened
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:21
stared  at me with her crinkly eyes - Oliver - what might she say?
Sachi
10:21
Sophia brushed her fiery hair to the side and began to bite her nails.
Maggie SWW
10:21
Geraldine peered up at me with wise eyes. Her wrinkled face reminded me of Mum's leather handbag. "What are you doing here?" She croaked.
Isla
10:21
Jack grunts, bends down, picks up bow and arrow and shoots…
Thomas - Birchwood Primary Schoo
10:21
Mrs smith glanced up with a straight face
Olivia.O Lionel Primary School
10:21
Eva is upset.
Anastasia Class 3
10:21
The waterfall started to stop...
Utkarsha- Warren Road
10:21
Mrs Figen glared at me and made a clicking sound with her tongue. May be she knows what I did.
Mrs James
10:21
Rylee and others - don't forget capitals for proper nouns (names).
Louie Summerfields
10:21
James stared hard and long and then turned around and waked away quietly.
Freya pensby primary school
10:21
Mrs Collin had wide, bulging eyes shimmered in the darkness.
India (Pensby Primary)
10:21
Miss Tingles stared at Sam with piercing black eyes. Sam started back. He found her frightening.
Ava
10:21
"Come over here...come and sit with me," whispered Mrs Army, patting the sit beside her.
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