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4th June Show
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Rylee summerfileds
10:26
Jeff was walking down the road crying.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:26
I backed off. "You're not going anywhere!"Julia said, and smiled a cold, icy smile.
Mrs Kilgour
10:26
Edith - what made her purse her lips? What had she thought or seen?
George-WR 5A
10:27
The nasal fold of Mrs Dorris became clearer by the minute.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:27
Devon - I love that he's trying to get away but she's not going to let him.
Mrs D Bispham Drive
10:27
Aidan - I really like 'The old woman was saturated with regret.'  What a powerful sentence!
Lucas Swann
10:27
He could hardly hold in all the anger and frustration, it came tumbling out like lava from a volcano.
Alfie WHPS
10:27
Sam spun around, whilst clenching his fist, slamming the door right in front of his poor mothers face. Knees on the floor begging to got to his friends house, although he forgot he was grounded.
Yustas Emporium
10:27
Mrs Wickett trembled, she stared at me with her walking stick, then she grabbed my hand and pushed me away. "If you come here once more...."
Dean SPS
10:27
Billy looked at me with hatred in his eyes and shouted with his voice filled with venom," go away or else! "
Lyra
10:27
Jake stared into the forest. He couldn't go in there. Not after... But he couldn’t think like that. Jake was going to escape. His cat had told him what to do.  Jake looked over his shoulder, back to his house, his gloomy, dark castle. “I don’t want to be a prince,” he thought. “I just won’t be.”  He clenched his fists, gritted his teeth, screwed up his eyes, summoned his courage, and stepped forward.
Pen Pen
10:27
Mrs F. Hillings asked her, "Take this" she passed Izzy the paper with string..
Keith Westfield School
10:27
I thought it was just a game... not a fight...
Ollie SummerFields
10:27
James stood up, fist high, ready to punch me.
Olivia.O Lionel Primary School
10:27
He looks loney.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:27
Rylee - how was he walking...where was he going to?
Ted K.B Lionel Primary School
10:27
"Parden,parden. Thanks to you the whole world will blow up in 48 hours, well done!"
Anastasia Class 3
10:27
Brave starded to clim the cliff waiting for the shimmering water to fall again.
Mrs H Bispham Drive Junior
10:27
Sarah I like Mrs Clacket as a name and the description of her eyes and hair - it makes her sound meek, yet her words are powerful!
Sam Upton St Leonards
10:27
Kristof only want someone to love.
Freya llangorse school
10:27
Ms Gorgon swirled round and shouted "how dare you, offend my fathers"
Kailen_Summerfields
10:27
Britrishia turned around, slammed the door shut and shouted "LEAVE NOW!!!" to me
sarah
10:27
Madam mishap gave me a glare that could stop a plume of lava, the lines on her face crinkling into a saddened expression.
AIDAN
10:27
I like yours Edith
Sam SwW
10:28
Robin held up the flaming torch, the light shining on his bronze, curly hair and sparkled on his freckles and sapphire eyes.
He peered swiftly around the illuminated centre of the marble temple until his nervous gaze settled on the old woman crouched over the intricate mahogany table.
Mrs H Bispham Drive Junior
10:28
Lucas - lovely sentence. I wonder what he is frustrated about?
Mrs Kilgour
10:28
Lucas - great simile 'lava from a volcano'. Could you replace your comma with a semi-colon for a greater pause and emphasis on that second half of the sentence?
Rosie
10:28
Theo. I love it.
Connor Sacred-Heart Battersea
10:28
Mary snapped her wrinkly fingers at me wandering why I had come to her village. " You weren't invited here."
Emily W Summerfields
10:28
Ms Ferrot shot a stern look at Elizabeth who was not even daring to breathe
Ava
10:28
His fire-like curls were cascading over his speckled forehead.
Indu WHPS
10:28
Rodin lifted his warm hood, up attempting to cover his whole face, raised his sleeve up his arm, and felt a shiver down his spine, trying to stay warm.
Mrs James
10:28
George your sentences contain so much information that I want to read the next part.  I have so many questions.  Who is she and how did she save your character's life?
Emma B
10:28
Jake was running as fast as his legs could carry him, his heart felt like it was beating out his chest. He couldn't look back he knew he wouldn't make it as the man was in touching distance....
Utkarsha- Warren Road
10:28
Jim’s hair tried to escape his poor quality hoodie.
Rylee summerfileds
10:28
Mrs Kevins turned round and shouted at the class.
Naomi
10:28
July was lost and alone.It was starting to rain.
Sam Upton St Leonards
10:28
Kristof wanted to be different
Ted K.B Lionel Primary School
10:28
"But how? I only went to school, what does that do?"
Hannah from St Andrews Primary
10:28
Her eyes glittered like stars in the evening sun, yet she was no angel.
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