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Pen Pen

10:28

Mrs F. Hillings extended her crinkled hand and passed Izzy the misshapened package.

Louis SWW

10:28

Ollies eyes were sapphire, taken from the iridescent sky.

Freya pensby primary school

10:28

Michael’s eyes longing and afraid as his ginger, curly hair slowly swaying.

Edith

10:28

Suddenly, she shouts at me "why are you just standing there, aren't you going to go and play outside" with that I ran into the kitchen and slammed the door behind me.

Mrs D Bispham Drive

10:29

Sarah - Madam Mishap - What a great name! Remember proper nouns need a capital letter.

Thea

10:29

Mrs Gregg old face bubbled with angry like a volcano as the children walk towards the river which was extremely dangerous.

Kit Sambridge

10:29

Young robin had eager eyes glaring into the distance.

Ted K.B Lionel Primary School

10:29

" Well, sit down, you know your friend, Alex"

Mrs H Bispham Drive Junior

10:29

Willem - lovely to see your ideas.

Mrs Kilgour

10:29

Hannah - ooo I love the way that you have set up a postive and then swooped in with a negative to make us wonder ...

Ted K.B Lionel Primary School

10:29

"Yeah"

Utkarsha- Warren Road

10:29

I like yours Sam. Sparkled on his freckles and sapphire eyes. Wow!

Kailen_Summerfields

10:29

Gingey got up, wiped the mud away and walked away from the sloopy mud.

Mrs James

10:29

Naomi - is July a character or the month?

10:30

Sarah - great name Madam Mishap. I can just imagine what will happen.

Mr Simpson Summerfields

10:31

eager eyes - great alliteration Kit

10:33

Emily - great verb choice for effect! 'shot a stern look'

Mrs D Bispham Drive

10:39

Lucas - fabulous description.. I really like 'came tumbling out like lava.'

Keith Westfield School

5:59

the crinkled hand of Mrs Gog-gin tapped on the table impatiently

Ted K.B Lionel Primary School

5:59

"His mum was born by spirits from the under-world, also known as Hell..."

Sam Upton St Leonards

5:59

Kristof Bain was gutted that he had a girlfriend that was called Lucy Gruddgy

Rylee summerfileds

5:59

bobby look at everyone that walk past wile he was sat on the bench.

Tilly@palace wood

5:59

when the old women talked her voice sounded ghostly. It filled the room with a spine chilling voice.

Devon

5:59

Kailash, could you use something else than mud twice?

Louie Summerfields

5:59

The stare the boy gave me was strong enough to stop light to get through.

Georgina

5:59

I peered at the ancient lady with curious chestnut eyes. ''Do you think that is actually true?" I asked Mrs Moon. "Well Dearie, It's a possibility," she murmured. That night those words kept ringing in my head like the consistent chatter of starlings and sparrows that live in the evergreen hedge at the bottom of my garden.

Harry summerfields

5:59

Gingers flashing eyes sparkled in the midnight sky.

Naomi

5:59

Julie’s fiery hair fell forward onto her face.

Elsa-Oak class

5:59

Miss Cackle trembled as her husband waddled away, her hands in fists of sadness and sorrow.

sunaya

6:00

she is old and then she is a teen