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Mr Warr
9:46
We will keep going for 5 more minutes!
Chloe M & Toby
9:47
The sound of footsteps filled my head there was something in there with me. I had to get out but i felt something on my shoulder it was cold and strong. What was it?
Mr Warr
9:49
Can you rewrite this with commas?
Lily and Finn
9:48
As I grow further into the ancient household, shadows encaved the house, with only a glimpse of light came through.
Ryan & Sophie
9:48
''Ummmmm get me out of here.''    The black handprints claimed to a ghost. The creepy chandelier watched over the gloomy house which had been battered by lightning killing the entire family who lived there!
Regan, Freya
9:48
My breaths grew heavier, it felt like i couldn't breathe, suddenly two blood-covered hands slammed onto the half-shattered window.
Phoebe and Theo
9:51
As I opened the door , I saw great big black hands moving around the room ; as I looked up there was a flickering chandelier ....creek....was I alone?
Hannah
9:52
The old chairs covered the floor;denting the wood.
Jasmine, William
9:52
As I approached the room, I held my breath from the smell of rotten; a silhiuete creeped towards me.
Chloe and Thomas
9:53
The abandoned, mouldy furniture gave me images and thoughts of who might of lived here, the first thing that came to mind was GHOSTS!
Jake and Harry
9:55
A bright light hovered above me as I looked over to see a gloomy shadow ready to take me alive!
Joel + Evie
9:55
I could feel atmosphere change as i entered the room I could see dark shadows stalking me, I could see faint evil spirits.
Mr Warr
9:55
Ok, we will have to stop the live lesson now. Can you please log off the laptops?
Leyton and Lili
9:56
As we took first steps into the haunted place, creepy thoughts rattled against the inside of our heads leaving us scarred for life.
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