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Grace and Hollie
10:10
The freezing mist  elgantly swaid against the trees
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:11
Try to include punctuation! Now tell me more.
Taylor and Jayden.
10:10
The trees stud like a dimend.
Demi and Blaine
10:11
The fog is like a blind fold because you can't see a thing
lewis
10:11
The Trees are stood as silently as a Army Soldier.
lucas
10:11
The lake is as pretty as a ruby.
Faith and charlotte
10:11
The elegant trees were buried in the fluffy, magnificent snow .
Paige and Edward
10:11
The reflecting water is glisterning like jewles.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:15
Taylor and Jayden.
10:15
The moon was shining like a dimend.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:16
Similes are great to use to describe something. Can you think of something else rather than a diamond?
lucas
10:16
The pumpkin coloured window's smelt like a BQ.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:16
I love that you have compared the colour to a pumpkin! Now describe what it might sound like if you were stood there?
Paige and Edward
10:16
The fire is burning like the sun.
lewis
10:16
The Old cottage is Burning as the Flash can run .
Darren and Daisy
10:16
The boiling hot house was on fire and there was someone in the burning house until someone came to save him...
Edward and Paige
10:16
As I stepped towards the abandoned house, the smell of fire went around the house and the moon was shining.I decided to step away and go into the woods.
Maddison and Isabel
10:16
The immense fire is blinding the moon !
Grace and Hollie
10:16
The moon glistening like a mirror.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:17
Glistening or glistened?
lucas
10:16
The burning abandoned house made me cough.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:17
What was making you cough? Describe it for your readers.
Taylor and Jayden.
10:16
The sky was darker as a berrie.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:18
Read that back - can you make it make sense?
Tiarna and Jessica
10:18
The deafining, crackling alerted my ears ,I crept towards the steaming house but the fire was blinding my eyes.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:19
Love this! Now take your reader further.
Demi and Blaine
10:19
You can smell GAS don't take a snith of the black smoke
lewis
10:19
The moon is glowing like glow sticks.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:20
Well done Lewis! Can you think of something else to compare the glowing to without using the glow again?
lucas
10:20
The moon shined like a diamond
Faith and charlotte
10:20
The moon shinying over the defdefing house .
Daisy and Darren
10:20
The haunted acient , house was on fire and there was a someone in the house while it was burning down.
Paige and Edward
10:20
The fire is burning the ancient,rickety house!
Honey
10:21
I could smell smoke, I could here cackling, I could see nothing but flames. There might and brightness blinded me.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:22
I like the pattern to that sentence. Could you add some more description to the smoke?
Maddison and Isabel
10:21
the immense fire tortured the steeming house !
lucas
10:21
The crackling fire came from the house so I tried to creep towards it but the smoke was blinding me...
Taylor and Jayden.
10:21
The house was like it was a flame.
Edward and Paige
10:21
The burning fire soon got out of the house, so I ran as fast as I could to get away from the smoke and gas that made my cough. A minuite later, I decide to call the firemen to put out the fire at the house.
Tiarna and Jessica
10:22
The loominess moon shined brightly in the midnight sky as the fire grew greater and greater.It was as orange as the sun and as hot as a oven.
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