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AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:23
The luminous moon shone. Can you thin of a better simile for the sun?
Demi and Blaine
10:22
The moon is shing bright like fire
Grace and Hollie
10:23
The moon shined like a diamond.
Taylor and Jayden.
10:23
Dark and gloomy.
lucas
10:23
Then I saw the full moon and it shined on my face...
Demi and Blaine
10:23
The moon is like, fire!!!!!
lewis
10:26
The burning cottage is loud as fire works crackerling in the sky as it was getting worser i called the fire begade and i took a step back because the crackerling fire is coming towards me.....
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:27
Good try Lewis! Try to make sure you use the same tense throughout your writing. Which is right... 'was loud as fireworks' or 'is loud as fireworks?
Tiarna and Jessica
10:26
Soon the whole house was on fire and it exploded into tiny little peices.
Honey
10:28
The smoke was so immense like the moon that shone down only on the rickety and ancient house.
Taylor and Jayden.
10:28
Wet dul wall.
Maddison and Isabel
10:28
The burnt down room,and wallpaper ripping down
lucas
10:28
The peeling wall felt like a
Demi and Blaine
10:28
The paper on the wall is comeing off the wood comes threw  it smashes really loud BONCK the smell is yucky
Paige and Edward
10:28
The wallpaper is peeling like a ghost is starting  to  wrip the wallpaper of the wall (OMG)
lewis
10:28
The peeling wallpaper aw
lucas
10:28
The peeling wall was as crunchy as a crisp.
Tiarna and Jessica
10:28
The wallpaper peeled off the worn out walls and the rusty floorboards creaked constantly.
Honey
10:28
The sound of crunching under my feet did nothing but scare me. Every step I took made a different noise.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:29
Well done everyone!
Daisy and Darren
10:29
In the haunted house. If u were walking or tiptoing the floor will creack . I could feel oxegen coming towords me .
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