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Amber Challis
7:42
Mysteriously, I opened the door and I heard creaking noises
Mr Sutton
7:42
James H, how did Jimmy open the door? What was he feeling?
Miss Wood (Scotland)
7:42
The cool air hit Bill's face as soon as he crossed the threshold. The bricks were slightly damp and that wet smell hung in the air. Gingerly, he stepped forward, avoiding the debris covering the floor.
Sachin
7:42
The windows of the decrepit and derelict shack were of no more and the rickety hinges were blown off.
Rocco APS
7:42
bob opens the door looked and  the room and shivered while hearing heavy breathing.
Mr Sutton
7:42
Thanks Pie! :-)
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
7:42
A miniscule, scaly-tailed mouse ran speedily towards her and flicked his tail to follow him. Mathilde sensed that the person was gone, as silence hung over the room.
Yifan
7:42
Thank you Mr Walker
Divine / Challis CPS\
7:42
The door creaked open slowly. Cautiously she walked in, dust fluttered. Just then she heard footsteps, what she saw was unbelievable.
Zion APS
7:42
The door creaked open very slowly, as Jacob got shivers down his spine.
Chelsea A.P.S
7:42
In school you find a secret door in your locker so you opened it and found stairs so you slowly go down, they creak every time you take a step, and you find a whole bunch of cockroaches and you scream in fright and run back up the stairs!
Tyler challis primary
7:42
Tom was crying because he was stuck down there.
Mr Sutton
7:42
Rocco, can you punctuate your sentence?
Liam
7:42
I looked around the eerie room. I froze
Caoimhe at 5/6 Magenta
7:43
Instantly, Rubarb's jaw dropped to the floor as his thoughts of a magical place slipped from his pale,skinny face.
Maddy D -KYILLA PS
7:43
Maddy walked into the room.She looked around at the gloomy stone walls.
Sachin
7:43
It was then that a vague silhouette started following her. There were no signs of anyone, so who could be there?
Coby Challis
7:43
Quietly, wind whistled throughout the dark, old bunker.
Mrs VB
7:43
@Carrie APS - I love the idea of walking through cobwebs - how did that feel?
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
7:43
The rat scampered up a plank of wood that Mathilde had not noticed before. She clambered determinedly up it, gritting her teeth.
Asha.F
7:43
Cautiously, I tip-toad into the dark and gloomy room, moving carefully with every step.
Brooke
7:43
Hardly daring to breathe, Hazel peered cautiously into the abandoned warehouse.
Sunny
7:43
But no one was there
Zion APS
7:43
The door creaked open slowly, as Jacob got shivers down his spine...
Dylan.m APS
7:43
The door creaked opened Dylan creeped around the room
Adriel and Sneha Challis primar
7:43
Mary sheepishly entered the room and as she walked in she felt a chill of fear down her spine.
Mr Sutton
7:43
Caoimhe > Great sentence!
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
7:44
When she fell onto the grass, her hands were blistered. Suddenly, she lost her footing and fell...
Mrs VB
7:44
@Bethany - scampered is a great word.
Tyler challis primary
7:44
Then he saw some sticks and wood.
Rhys (challis)
7:44
Tom some how got out
Hudson
7:44
Shannon walk in as  a wall broke.
Ila.H
7:44
I think it is a very creepy place with of snakes and spiders  and spider webs . YUCK
Mackenzie A-H A.P.S
7:44
She  saw... A little wolf  well she through the it was until the sun set. The little wolf turned into a ...
Mr Walker
7:44
Bethany! Great effort. The mouse communicating with its tail is a great idea. Does it have a name?
James.H APS
7:44
When Jimmy was opening the door he was feeling a bit scared and cold.
APS Jonathan
7:44
The door creek's wide open as soon as Jonathan gets in the door shuts fast closes.
4 & 6 York DHS
7:44
The cellar was dark... All of a sudden he heard chains rattling, the floorboards were creaking and in the distance he could hear screams, sounded like they were just the other side of the brick wall.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
7:44
Mathilde landed with a thump on the hard, cobbled floor and rubbed her back. A creak, the roof splintered...
Mr Sutton
7:44
Adriel and Sneha, can you find a better adverb than sheepishly?
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