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Noah Challis
7:44
Nervously, Coby looked for a way out.
Libby Challis Primary school
7:44
As Layla was running from her sister, she fell into an abandonment
Guest
7:44
Felix from Kyilla Primary school,when Felix went in the room and first thing that scared was the door creaked open.
Annick
7:44
Awkwardly I struggled through the the door, what had happened to my house?
sophie.s Aveley primary school
7:44
once she got a good look she knew sombody was here the foot prints on the foor she said' hello i know your here come out' no voice came out.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
7:45
Mathilde choed under the rubble of the broken roof. She carefully pushed her way through the rubbish and gazed up at the darkening sky.
Guest
7:45
you open the door creek  then all of a sudden a piece of roof fall bright then..
Stella-Kyilla P.S
7:45
I walked cautiously into the dimly lit room,then I was thrown into darkness, no sound around him.
Mr B
7:45
Maddy - You could continue to explore the senses of the main character exploring the room.
Steph
7:45
Reluctantly, George peered around the weathered door into the gloom and stench.
Edie H
7:45
Lizzie hid in the corner as the door creeped open.
(Rachel L) Aveley Primary School
7:45
As soon as Julia put her hand on the door knob, it came crashing down, as if it was one hundred years old!
Tyler challis primary
7:45
He grabbed the sticks and wood to try to make a ladder to get out.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
7:45
Clouds conspired the sun and Mathilde shivered...she had a feeling that someone was there...
ethan
7:46
I like yours Yifan
AvatarDavid Mitchell
7:46
What did you like about it? Make sure you tell the writer. Well done for giving some feedback!
Saskia H
7:46
Annabeth shuffled along the dusty hall, her heart pounding inside her head. Something was following her. Something was in the deep shadows...
Emma wiggle from the wiggles
7:46
Emma starved for years trying to get out
Yifan
7:46
After brownie saw the chicken nugget he flew to space.
Yong APS
7:46
Jake was looking at the empty room rat running around the floor but suddenly the roof begun to
Daniel Challis
7:46
Fearfully, the boy crept into the bunker, he saw something moving. What could it be?
Divine / Challis CPS\
7:46
The door creaked open slowly. Cautiously she walked in, dust fluttered around the room. Just then, she heard faint squeaking. She turned on the light and...
Felix
7:46
''help me, where am I''.
Haylee Green Challis
7:47
I love your radio blog and I think that picture is a little creepy don’t you think.I like it and I have a sentence for it. Anxiously the children sneaked through the door seeing if anyone was in there and one of them said “I think we should go back to bed.” So they went back to bed.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
7:47
Stella Kyilla: I like that you were 'thrown into darkness' :)
Asha.R
7:47
Asha slowly crept in. She regreted it. The door slammed . There he was, the man you only thought excisted in movies
AvatarDavid Mitchell
7:47
Well done everyone! Some super sentences.
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