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LuisWRPS
10:26
The vibration of the wings turns them as colourful as a paint pallet.
Isla
10:26
The humming birds hum echoed through the moss green forest.
Louis SWW
10:26
The vivid wings distinctively flapped as the flower slumped forward.
Larraitz
10:26
Flashes of purple, green and blue revealing to the eye of the Blue Bell.
Miss Mallon
10:26
The pearlescent hummingbird approached the blue flower in order to feed, but as
Ashleigh
10:26
The humming bird is multi colored and it can fly while getting food .The humming bird fly really fast i think its the fastest bird in the world
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:27
Sachi
10:28
The cat went onto its hind legs, watching...
Miss Hall
10:28
Effortlessly poised to strike, the patrol of the cat had begun.
Amelia.E
10:28
The curious cat was staring into the garden ready to pounce.
Isabella
10:28
The brown fat cat was about to pounce on a small creature.
LuisWRPS
10:28
Its back arched up; it was certainly on full alert.
Sachin
10:28
A furry tail coils out of the body of the cat.
Abigail
10:28
The mini tigers face was soft.
Bethany
10:28
The wary cat perched on the post gingerly and his striped tail flicked around, sensing the air behind him, looking for other animals.
Jack Davey
10:28
The cat perched like a meerkat glaring for Gerald the mouse walking on his morning stroll in the dark looming forest.
Mr Walker
10:28
Poised elegantly on the post, Tabatha prepares to strike.
BENJI
10:29
The cat was on the wood as it looked through the woods
charlie
10:29
The cat preyed on its perch ready to strike.
Sachin
10:29
Jagged talons prepare to rip and tear Gerald's tail
Sophie Pritchard
10:29
The vigilant cat sat watching its prey. It pounced down on Gerald quickly.
Louis' DAD SWW
10:29
The cat scanned the horizon, wishing his paws hadn't been glued atop the fencepost.
Kitty Wright.
10:29
The cat stared at the distance as I watched it, she was looking at something talking even something I could not see.
Izzy
10:29
The cat  balanced majestically on the post ready to pounce.
Freddie W
10:30
The fat Cat is looking in the gardens to chase the birds. Cheeky Cat
Onora
10:30
The Cat is crouching down ready to pounce.
Emily-Oaksey Class3
10:30
The cats posture was like a medieval kings
Kobe
10:30
The cats eyes  slit as it sat and waited to catch its prey. It pounced.
Ajuna CTk
10:30
The hummingbird has aqua blue, emerald green and voilet colours on it just like a water pallet
Mrs James
10:30
Ashleigh, your sentences remind me of a factual report.  Read it again to yourself; can you spot where you may need to edit?
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:30
Great advice Mrs James!
Ella
10:30
The grey cat looked down upon it's prey, picked it up, hid it in the kitchen awaiting for Mum to find it. AAARRRGGGGHHH! Silly old cat!
Sachin
10:31
I didn't write the sachin 1
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:31
I'll edit that one Sachin.
Gregory SPS
10:31
The cat balances on the wooden pole watching for any movement in the grass.
Charlotte
10:32
Eyes fixated on its prey, the seemingly innocent cat is ready to pounce.
Niamh
10:32
Pepper surveyed the garden, like a queen watching over her land.
Douglas
10:32
The brown and white cat paused on the wooden stick spying on Gerald the mouse ready to pounce.
Sachi
10:32
Sachi: Instead of went you could use ambled.
Abigail
10:32
The cat jumped elegantly onto the post of the tall fence .
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