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AvatarDavid Mitchell
9:29
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10:23
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Jacob P
10:24
With trepidation, Paul clambered into the cellar, determined to find out its secrets.
Sachin
10:24
In the stark room, the dusty bricks thudded onto the ground, powdering into a grey ash.
Isla
10:24
Jack looked around,
Tallulah
10:25
Gingerly, Amber stepped into the cold cellar. Immediately shivers went down her spine.
Holly
10:25
Hesitating, Mimi tiptoed into the aging cellar, trembling inside.
Isabella
10:25
Gingerly, Ella peered round the corner of the strande room
Sachi
10:25
The old cellar was dirt encrusted, with broken boards and stone and rubble. The walls were crumbling as Jack peered through, a large chunk of the ceiling fell just inches away from him. String and moss were hanging from the hole in the ground. Nervously, he stepped in.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:26
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Emily-Oaksey Class3
10:26
I explored the depths of our new basement. It was dilapidated and very dusty. Then i saw something in the corner of my eye...
Bethany
10:27
Puzzled, Lillie stared around the cold, abandoned warehouse and paused. Nimbly, she climbed onto the sturdy stone slab and her feet slipped as she attempted to climb up to a hole in the roof.
Lily SWW
10:27
The Shed was clear but had had bits of wood in it.
Liz (Mrs W)
10:27
Shafts of light, entered the cellar of the bombed out shell, uncovering secrets hidden for years.
Miss Shah
10:27
As her heart pounded, Rosie gazed around the musty surroundings.
Sachin
10:27
The lead roof gave in to the gusty breeze. Shards cascaded violently.
George (11)
10:27
Suddenly, a clatter rang out through the empty warehouse chilling bone to the core.
Mr Walker
10:27
Tallulah: Great use of the word ‘gingerly’ to show Amber is scared.
Devon
10:27
Silently, Jessie crept further down, following every step the dark figure took.
Jacob P
10:27
Paul anxiously clambered into the pitch black cellar, glancing at the gleaming sun through the window.
Niamh
10:27
Jasmine paused. Cautiously she stepped into the dark cellar.
Sarah
10:27
Taking a deep breath, Rachel stepped into the shadowy cellar.  Something rustled in the dusty corner.
Onora
10:27
Elle was scared but full of curiosity.
keerat
10:27
Cautiously, I tip toed through the old brick room looking around for any danger.
Martha
10:27
Breathless, Mazy creeped into the dark, abandoned cellar, staring into the black, watching ash crumple down the walls.
Mrs McCalmont
10:28
Hesitating, Lara listened. The darkness was split by her dragon lamp. A figure stepped out from the black.
Noah
10:28
a spacious room, the walls made of damp stone, ruble and dust strewn across the floor...
Shreesha
10:28
The dusty-dark room with rotten iron.
Mrs Moss
10:28
Treading lightly, Jo stepped cautiously through the door and into a shaft of sunlight that streaked from the vaulted roof.
Reece CHS
10:28
Old cottage room, cold and dark abandoned full of rats and spiders.
Ryan
10:28
the ancient room crumbled to ash
Charlotte@ oaksey
10:28
Finally the mystery was solved... Jake had found the secrets that have been abandoned for decades....
Krista
10:28
Frantically looking for an escape root  Jamiea fell down . “Aahhhhhhhhhhh !”
Isla
10:28
Jack peered around, Ron had really trapped him well. He saw a hole at the top. He thought about how he could get up there.
Alice Q
10:28
Reluctantly, Lucy crept into the dilapidated cellar, eyes scanning for spiders. Webs hung from weathered, old bricks making her heart beat fast.
Nikki
10:28
Helen crept into the dusty cellar and squinted at the ruined bricks.
Charlotte
10:28
Rummaging around the murky corridors I accidentally stumbled  into the forgotten room choking me with thick dust.
LuisWRPS
10:28
As a small, hopeful beam of light shone dimly, Gerald cautiously scuttled along the cellar's rusty floor.
Hannah
10:28
Cass tiptoed down the rickety staircase, glancing behind at every pace.
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