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Harrison
7:14
Under a dark and gloomy sky, a haunted forest grew up the side of the rocky cliff and around a ramshackle mansion.
Imogen and Joshua
7:14
The abandoned house, on the hill was about to fall with all the thunder and lightning.
Mr Tinsley
7:15
Imogen and Joshua - on the hill is the adverbial phrase. Edit your sentence to use a comma in the correct place. You may need to more your sentence around
Abigail
7:15
“Why did you push my daughter of the cliff ?” Shouted Mrs parker
Luke and Callum
7:15
The drop more terrifying then the building . The dark mist drifted through the air
Miles and Dom
7:15
I stared at the wilderness of smog before my eyes, and squinted at what looked like a mansion standing on its own on the hill. This is funny, I thought. There have been many ghost sightings on this hill. I gasped as a shrill cry erupted from the mansion, and blood spattered the window panes.
Tom & Dan
7:15
In the middle of nowhere was a hill, a haunted house stood on top of it, surrounded by mist and fog.
Mr Tinsley
7:16
Tom and Dan - you have used a comma where you should have used something else
Mia & India
7:16
As I stepped into the ghostly manner, I felt a shiver down my spine. No wonder this house was abandoned, it is in the middle of nowhere. As I stepped forward, the floor cracked, all of a sudden I was falling into a deep abyss of darkness.
Isabelle H
7:16
She hesitated; everyday this year a warrior who thought themselves valiant and heroic would attempt to slay the spirit living in this very house, each of them had failed and returned empty-handed or had not returned at all.
Isla&Cossie
7:16
A house on the edge of the cliff had a fire next to it. Someone put a firework next to the house it was getting closer and closer until it exploded everywhere and it was never to be see again.
Harrison
7:16
The mysterious fog covered the ground like a carpet, as if it was hiding something that it didn’t want people to see.
Abigail
7:16
“Why did you push my daughter off the cliff! “ shouted Mrs Parker You would kill me if I did it to yours! ”.
Tom & Dan
7:16
The mountain was ready to fall, along with the house.
Leo & Charlie
7:16
The house of terror that everyone fears,was ready to come timberline down the large steep mountain.
Isabelle H
7:16
“Kim! Come back here, Now!” He shouted again and again, but she continued to hesitantly walk towards the building. Kim was their last chance to save the village, but the consequence of breaking the curse was death, and only death. He knew that if she was the hero the prophecy stated he would be in mourning until his life’s end.
Izzy and toni
7:16
The mansion stood tall and proud, as a window creeked open
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