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Mia & India
6:58
Today is an amazing day today was the day we will be going to the beach. I would be bringing my best friend but she wasn’t home. So when I got there I wanted to explore the beach to collect shells but after I found one I saw a mysterious figiour of a woman in the mist. ‘Oh god’ I thought. I’m not alone. I ran towards to the woman but she stood still. I was shocked the figure was stone and looked like my best friend. Who would have done this to her ?
Harrison
6:58
As people walked past the rusty old person they cried in fear
Josh and Imogen
6:58
On the beach was a man  who got burnt for trespassing on others property.
Abigail
6:58
Every time he said something to me, his tongue set on fire and another piece of macaroni grew onto his head
Miles and Dom
6:58
A mud covered zombie roamed the murky beach as a minuscule mouse scuttled passed its decaying feet, worn out tentacles erupted from its mouth in a puking way and the helpless mouse was ripped in half as blood splattered everywhere and got gobbled up. The horrific sight made my hairs stand on end as it gave me a death stare.
Mr Tinsley
6:59
MIles and Dom - check and edit your sentence structure
Ruby and Ankita
6:59
Standing in the middle of a sandy ,clear beach, a tall, rusted figure stared into the distance while the rushing waves of the beach clashed against him. People stared at him in wondering how he got there and who he was.
Leo & Charlie
6:59
The ancient man got burnt  in the warming sunlight and got stuck in bundles of rocks.
Luke and Callum
7:00
His skin obsorbed the sun warmth and this created a crisp smell . Wich lurked upon the beach .
Mr Tinsley
7:00
Luke and Callum - spellings
Isabelle H
7:00
Kim sprinted as fast as her body would let her, screaming at nearby people to run, to leave, to evacuate. The body they had uncovered from the army was only a small part to the lake town’s war army.
Josh and Imogen
7:00
On the beach was a man who got burnt for trespassing on other people’s property.
Leo & Charlie
7:01
The man's skin obsorbed into rock .
Mr Tinsley
7:02
Leo and Charlie - absorbed
Tom and Dan
7:02
He walked into a haunted storage box on the clear Crystal water. He found a flesh-eating beast who sucked out all the life out of him! And now, he sits on a rock, on a beach whacking the sea AND THE HAUNTED BOXES!!!
Neve & Kacie
7:02
As the man came closer, and closer, and closer, my breath turned cold, my teeth began to chatter and my knees rocked from side to side...
Josh and Imogen
7:02
On the beach, was a man who got burnt for trespassing on other people’s property.
Harrison
7:03
in the middle of nowhere there was a rock solid statue that no one went close to it.
Isabelle H
7:03
Charlotte brought out her messenger, gazing at the body before her.” Test subject 903 unsuccessful,”,
Isla&Cossie
7:03
An ancient piece that had the alien substants . The aliens must of made this.
Mr Tinsley
7:03
Isla and Cossie - substance
Kieran and Laurence
7:04
When you get  buried  in this substance it gets harder and harder until you...Become the hardened metal!
Mr Tinsley
7:04
Izzy and toni
7:04
On the beach, I saw a figure in the distance. For a second I stood there wondering what it was, then I realised in a panic it was my mum.
Mia & India
7:04
Today was an amazing day. Today was the day we will be going to the beach, I would be bringing my best friend,but she wasn’t there. So when I got there,I wanted to explore the beach to collect shells. But after I found one, I saw a mysterious figiour of a woman in the mist.’Oh god,’ I thought. I’m not alone. I ran towards the woman,but she stood still. I was shocked the figure was stone. ‘Oh my word,’ I had tires in my eyes. The stone figure was my best friend. Who would have done this to her?
Mr Tinsley
7:05
Mia and India - so much better, well done!
Harrison
7:05
In the middle of nowhere, there was a solid rock statue that no one went close to.
Luke and Callum
7:06
His skin absorbed the suns warmth . This created a crisp smell .
Isabelle H
7:06
Charlotte brought out her messenger, gazing at the body before her. “Test subject is dead, test 902 unsuccessful,” she spoke to it, “Scott Malid, age 32.”
Miles and Dom
7:06
A mud covered zombie roamed the murky beach. A minuscule mouse scuttled past its decaying feet and worn-out tentacles erupted from its mouth. The poor creature was torn in half and the beast consumed its remains. It turned to me and rested its eye sockets on me in a death stare. My hairs stood on end as its mouth began to open once again.
Harrison
7:08
Clinging onto the edge of the mountain, an abandoned mansion which hadn’t been looked after in years, had just been rediscovered.
Neve & Kacie
7:08
The old house on the hill had been there for hundreds of years, abandoned. Today was the day I go into this horror house but many who go in there don’t come out. Ever...
Luke and Callum
7:09
Darkness cloaked the house , the crackling mountain ready to fall .
Mr Tinsley
7:09
Luke and Callum - Does this make sense? Maybe think about it being two sentences and adding more detail to the second part
Leo & Charlie
7:09
The haunted rainforest was nearby a dirty,old rough house which  ghosts may of invaded.
Abigail
7:10
Leaning closer to the edge of the cliff, the haunted hotel had had its final customer after the last incedent.
Hannah and Jack.
7:11
The haunted tower of terror, catches guests in the twilight zone, Floor 13. A family of four with a famous mum, stayed at the hotel, but when the bell boy lead them into the lift to the 12th floor, he accidentally sent to the TWILIGHT ZONE. They where never seen again!
Mr Tinsley
7:14
Hannah and Jack - The haunted tower of terror catches guests in the twilight zone, floor 13. A family of four (with a famous mum) stayed at the hotel. They accidentally got trapped in the hotel when the bellboy lead them to the lift. The youngest child asked to press the button, his finger slipped. Floor 13.
Kieran and Laurence
7:14
The dark, gloomy, depressing sky covered the haunted, abandoned house which has been there for years. So i decided to investigate it and...
Izzy and toni
7:14
I started at the black, gloomy figure standing at the window. I felt like it could see into my sole.
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