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Mr Tinsley
5:55
Maddie and Neve - Great! check and correct a spelling
Tom and Dan
5:56
Thick mist covers the air making it hard to see the other side of the lake, covering it like a blanket.
Mia & India
5:56
As the mist covered the frosty sky the carming waves crashed open land.
Mr. Rennekamp
5:56
The fox was going to hunt for rabbits.
Isla and Izzy Y
5:56
A blanket of fog, wrapped around the trees while the snow sprinkled down.
Charlie,Leo
5:56
Down in the river.
Hannah and Jack
5:56
Frosty mist cover the snowy tree tops,  that made the air chilly.
Kacie and Annie
5:56
As the frosty snow twinkled in the reflection of the slowly rippling water, the birds began to fly into the distance
Mr Tinsley
5:57
Kacie and Annie - This is amazing! Can you describe the distance including the mist?
Abigail and Imogen
5:57
Covering the  top of the trees , the white mystical fog blocked the beautiful sight of the sky
Josh And Laurence
5:57
Vibrant white snow filled the misty area.
Cossie and Kieran
5:57
As fog covers the land,the lake began to freeze
IzzyH and Toni
5:57
A suddden rush of chilled air sent mulitiple ripples into the cold, icy lake.
Josh And Laurence
5:57
Bright grey foggy mist filled the air like a void of smoke.
Ruby and Ankita
5:57
In the distance, frosty white mist overflows the air as the icy lake ripples. While slowly  the trees became fainter and fainter until they were out of sight.
Mr Tinsley
5:58
Ruby and Ankita - Great description! Can you edit your use of punctuation in your second sentence?
5:59
Everyone - Don't forget your full stops. You need them, even on an iPad!
Jake & Harry.
5:59
As the weather began to fold into a dark gloomy cloud the water transformed into ice
Tom and Dan
5:59
The trees were forming a mystical place filled with wildlife.
Maddie and Neve
5:59
Snow fell dowN
Callum and Luke
5:59
Mist slowly rose from the gloomy water and what lurkes beneath is not to be discovered.
Charlie,Leo
5:59
Fog arose from the river as vibrant snow covered the forests next to the river.
Abigail and Imogen
5:59
Reflecting on the water,were the snow filled trees.
Miles and Dom
6:00
A sheet of pure white fog brewed in the wintry woods and a distant, chilling cry of a wolf broke the eerie silence
Mr Tinsley
6:00
Miles and Dom - Amazing! I love your use of alliteration. Where was the wolf?
Maddie and Neve
6:00
Above the frost covered waters,gloomy mist wrapped around the dark oak trees as snow fell gracefully
Tom and Dan
6:01
A thick layer of fog covered the lake while snow fell down
Jake & Harry.
6:01
The snow fell down rapidly as it covered the winter ground.
Kacie and Annie
6:01
As the frosty snow twinkled in the reflection of the slowly rippling water, the birds flew into the blanket of mist that went on for  miles.
Mr Tinsley
6:01
Kacie and Annie - It's even better now!
Miles and Dom
6:01
In the icy oblivion
IzzyH and Toni
6:01
A distant howl could notify anyone of the lone fox living behind the shadowy walls of thick oak.
Isla and Izzy Y
6:01
The mystical mist came down as the river flowed gently.
Abigail and Imogen
6:01
In the distance, you could just see a faint shape of a bird.
Mr Tinsley
6:03
Josh And Laurence
6:05
As the frosty snow shimmered in the area the brilliant colossal trees waved through the air
Ruby and Ankita
6:05
In the distance, frosty white mist overflows the air as the icy lake ripples.While slowly, the trees became fainter and fainter until they were out of sight.
Abigail and Imogen
6:05
Falling of the top of the mountains, snow was dropping into the deep blue lake
Mia & India
6:05
As snow fell on the Icey trees and the river slowly forming into ice the playful bunnies hopped around the snowy rocks.
IzzyH and Toni
6:05
The aroma of chilled air lingered around the trees.
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