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Mr Tinsley
6:06
Izzy H and Toni - I love your use of aroma and lingered. You have chosen some fantastic vocabulary
Maddie and Neve
6:06
Ice reflected of of the sapphire blue waters as a shrilling cry awoke sleepy animals awoke from their hibernation.
Jake & Harry.
6:06
As we walked closer to the haunted house the stars got light
Mr Tinsley
6:07
Jake and Harry - Your sentence started really well and then tailed off a bit. Can you describe the night sky a different way?
Callum and Luke
6:07
The bright radiant shone upon the moon light.
Mr Tinsley
6:08
Callum and Luke - This sentence doesn't make sense. You need to have a look at this and correct it.
Abigail and Imogen
6:08
Twinkling in the night sky , you could see thousands of stars that looked like diamonds
Tom and Dan
6:08
Stars covered the night sky like lanterns, lighting up the land.
Mr Tinsley
6:08
Tom and Dan - Great use of a simile. Can you describe the moon too?
Jake & Harry.
6:09
As we walked closer to the haunted house I had butterflies in my tummy.
Mr Tinsley
6:09
Jake and Harry - Why did you have butterflies? Would stomach be a better word to use?
Miles and Dom
6:09
As the eerie moon illuminated the sun baked lawn, a piercing scream came from the shabby, burning house.
Isla and Izzy Y
6:09
As the night sky twinkle like stars, a house set a light while flames of fire gushed out the chimney.
Mr Tinsley
6:10
I like your effort yo use a simile. The night sky does have twinkling stars though. Can you add a different one instead>
6:11
^ Isla and Izzy Y
Charlie,Leo
6:11
The moon shines bright in the pitch black night while the creepy looking house burns down.
Mia & India
6:11
As the fire slowly covered the house in smoke the dry grass peacefully blew in the wind.
Mr Tinsley
6:11
Mia and India - This is great. Could you perhaps use a comma?
Maddie and Neve
6:12
As the moonlight shone in the stary night, the fire burned and crackled as it grew increasingly fast,dangerous and spine chilling...
Mr Tinsley
6:13
Maddie and Neve - I like your sentence! Could you think of a different word than 'fast' would faster or quicker work better?
Hannah and Jack
6:14
Spooky, illuminous on fire wooden home, lit up the night's moon, as the milky way was glowing flaniter and flaniter.
Mr Tinsley
6:15
Hannah and Jack - I like your effort to use lots of adjectives! The first part of your sentence doesn't make sense. Try the spooky, empty house lit up the night sky as flames as large as_____
Jake & Harry.
6:15
The night sky lit up like a diamond in a jewel case
Ruby and Ankita
6:15
Walking slowly, a flickering light appeared just above the hills.The Milky Way glimmered beside the corner of the house while, the moon shone brightly in the distance.
Kacie and Annie
6:15
As a rim of dark blue formed on the eastern horizon, the stars were throbbing like crystals shimmering like the sun.
Callum and Luke
6:15
The radiant flames shone upon the moonlight
Josh And Laurence
6:15
As the void of stars surrounded the area an abandoned house set with flames and sparked the Milky Way shone in the darkness of the sky.
Isla and Izzy Y
6:16
Orange flames bursted the night sky as the air filled with patchy smoke.
Mr Tinsley
6:16
Isla ansd Izzy Y - Burst in not bursted
Cossie and Kieran
6:16
As the fire filled the house, the stars stole the night.
Abigail and Imogen
6:16
Flames rose out of the windows, the chimney and the door setting the whole building up in an eruption of Flame
Mia & India
6:16
As the stars twinkled in the night sky the moon shone down on the fire burning flames.
IzzyH and Toni
6:16
Scents of burning wood filled the air, setting an  aroma of fear and curiosity while sparks exploded from the burning building.
Miles and Dom
6:16
A clawed shadow leaped towards the screaming voice and one last spine-chilling cry echoed as velvet blood spattered on the smashed window panes.
Maddie and Neve
6:17
I have to the RSPCA is that you will have to come to my year to help you and help me out you your family will help
Isla and Izzy Y
6:17
Like diamonds
Maddie and Neve
6:17
As the moonlight shone in the stary night,the fir
Mia & India
6:17
As the fire slowly covered the house,the dry grass peacefully blew in the wind.
Tom and Dan
6:17
The moon and stars shone beautifully over the haunted house
Mr Tinsley
6:18
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