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Isla and Izzy Y
6:19
As the night sky twinkle like diamonds, a house set a light while flames of fire gushed out the chimney.
Miles and Dom
6:19
The man on the moon awoke and shivered the nearby town
IzzyH and Toni
6:19
Wind and flame gushed out of the chimney, clashing with the radiant stars above as if a battle of the elements had broke out.
Mr Tinsley
6:19
Izzy H and Toni - flames
Jake & Harry.
6:20
The elegant sky blew up with beauty whilst the haunted house burned with flames.The wolves howled at the lighted moon that shaded of in the darkeness of the night fog.
Josh And Laurence
6:20
As the bright moon shone in the sky the house made a vibrant light of fire
Maddie and Neve
6:20
As the moonlight shone in the stary night,the fire burned and cracked as it grew increasingly quicker,dangerous and spine chilling...
Charlie,Leo
6:20
The graceful moon crusaded upon the grass below and the stars lit up the midnight sky.
Mr Tinsley
6:21
Charlie and Leo - I like that you've taken ideas from other posts to improve yours
Hannah and Jack
6:21
Spooky, empty house lit up the night sky as flames as large as fireworks.
Callum and Luke
6:21
The beaming moon light brightly shone .
Abigail and Imogen
6:21
As the flames became giant a piercing scream came from inside...
Charlie,Leo
6:21
Wallpaper was all torn and it smelt like stinky socks.
Mr Tinsley
6:22
Charlie and Leo - Why did is smell like that? What had been there before?
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Callum and Luke
6:22
There was a eerie sense like a sheet of silence
Mr Tinsley
6:23
Callum and Luke - This is a great start to a sentence. Can you extend it because it isn't complete?
Josh And Laurence
6:23
Creeping across the creaking floor a blanket of darkness filled the room
IzzyH and Toni
6:23
Wind and flames gushed out of the chimney, clashing with radiant stars above s if a battle of the elements had broke out.
Isla and Izzy Y
6:23
As soon as you walk in you will smell burning clothes  and rotten food.
Mr Tinsley
6:24
Isla and Izzy - Good use of adjectives but why does it smell like that?
Jake & Harry.
6:24
As I slowly strolled through the abandoned kitchen everything was rotting away and calapsing on to the crooked floor
Mr Tinsley
6:24
Jake and Harry - Great ideas. You seem to have forgotten some punctuation though, Edit and send again please
Hannah and Jack
6:25
As we walk on to the black, burned floor, I could smell rotten food siting of the brown table, the wall paper peeled off on to the orange sofa.
Abigail and Imogen
6:25
Walking inside this worn out batterd home , made me remember the house I lived in before I was thrown into the street after my house fire.
Mr Tinsley
6:25
Abigail and Imogen - This is great! I NEED to know more!
Charlie,Leo
6:25
Wild animals have been in there where I have to stay tonight
Miles and Dom
6:26
A chair screeched creepily across the creaky floor as the walls felt like dry wood and a stench of muck filled the air. The bathroom was empty and paintings were wrecked and battered. Suddenly, a screech came from the kitchen. I was not alone!
Mr Tinsley
6:26
Miles and Dom - Wow! I need to know more about this
Mia & India
6:26
As we walked inside the house, the sound of the floor creeked and the walls were torn and broke it must of been here for over 1000 years because the house smelt like rotten flesh.
Cossie and Kieran
6:26
As I walked in, the smell filled the air with gas and the walls were crumbling and wrapping off the walls.
Jake & Harry.
6:27
As I walked in it smelled like silent death
IzzyH and Toni
6:27
An eerie fog rose up from the other side of the battered and stained Windows.
Mr Tinsley
6:28
Cossie and Keiran - Great use of verbs. Can you can wrapping for ripping or falling?
Abigail and Imogen
6:28
lol that remined of the furniture was a tiny chair made for a two year old
Miles and Dom
6:28
I wandered towards the kitchen and the rancid smell of mud caked walls and... was that corpses filled my nostrils.
Charlie,Leo
6:28
An aroma of radiant crushed walls smelled like a tornado that just happened right next to you.
Isla and Izzy Y
6:28
Because nobody has been there for years and there is graffiti all over the walls
Maddie and Neve
6:29
As I walked swiftly through the abandoned worn place which someone once called home, the smell burned my insides with each breath I took.
Callum and Luke
6:29
There was a eerie sense like a sheet of silence that cloaked the room.
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