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miley and munashe
6:26
The volcano, which erupted, shot out massive clumps of wine, tepid lava
Mr Shelton
6:26
Finally a relative clause! Well done!
Jamillah and Phoebe
6:27
The crimson ,ochre, canary volcano arupted
Richard and james
6:27
The figure told her to climb
Jacob and Dylan
6:28
The volcano erupted killing one person at a time until everyone else on the island was burnt alive
6:30
The volcan erupted killing everyone into ashes.
Richard and james
6:30
The figure told her to climb the volcano, which was covered in coal coloured rock, to get freedom.
Mr Shelton
6:30
Nice relative clause.
Lucas and jess
6:31
The towering flaming volcano erupted and the two holes in the volcano lit up showing a skull then a massive magma monster burst out of  the top of the volcano and came crawling for the girl.
Mr Shelton
6:31
The volcano erupts. Can you use a simile or a metaphor to continue the story?
Harrison and Riley and Lennon
6:32
The volcano erupted into fire and then smoke puffed up in the shape of a sad face like something was giving us a warning
Richard and james
6:32
The volcano was as hot as the sun you could feel the sweat from the smoke.
Jacob and Dylan
6:32
Someone tried to climbed on top of the volcano sacrificed his own life to save the universe but it didn't work he blocked everything with metal but the fire was to high it killed everyone.
Jamillah and Phoebe
6:32
As, the alabaster, slate,  moon shon over the  volcano
Mr Shelton
6:33
Loving your colours vocabulary!
Olivia and Dilly
6:33
As I was getting closer to the exit, a figure, which was all in black and looked like a little creepy doll, appeared ahead of me and trodded out of the cave. I followed it curious to find out what will happen next. To my eyes there stood a vast volcano. After a while, ashes started sprouting out of the volcano then lava bursted out a second after it.
Stephen, Shinwin o and Oliver
6:33
We we’re having a party on on a lost island When the music stopped we all heard a crackling noise and the volcano was erupting
Mr Shelton
6:34
Full stop.
Richard and james
6:34
The volcano erupted!The hole city got covered but I climbed to the top and got my freedom.
miley and munashe
6:34
Many years before, the volcano erupted like a thunderstorm, but it shot out lava.
Jacob and Dylan
6:35
The volcano erupted killing and destroying souls and buildings it was to powerful so it erupted every month trying to wipe out more and more
Poppie , Millie
6:35
The volcano argued like a astronaut in space
Lucas and jess
6:36
The volcano spat lava all over Pompeii houses were drowning in lava. Pompeii was dieing.
Mr Shelton
6:36
Could the first sentence be 2 sentences?
miley and munashe
6:37
Many years ago before many knew the world, lived a goddess named Scarlet, the goddess of fire. She lived on an island just off the coast of Hawaii, but was in terrible danger because there was a Dementorgrim which on the island which was half dementor and half werewolf. That was bad but not as bad as the next problem…THE VOLCANO which was about to erupt any day, all of the people were terrified but they weren’t being evacuated because of the monster because he could come down from the volcano any day at any time.
Mr Shelton
6:37
I love the suspense that you have created.
Imisi and frankie
6:37
A volcano irruption.
Poppie , Millie
6:37
As the volcanic pool erupted all over the town square and everything turned to dust
Mr Shelton
6:38
Full stop.
Jacob and Dylan
6:38
Everyone was afraid to climb up the volcano a selfish person said everyone else part from him would burn but he was wrong he had a plane every one snuck on throwing the selfish person into the volcano,
Harrison and Riley and Lennon
6:38
The warning was true it erupted. I heard a little girl crying for her mum.
Lucas and jess
6:38
The volcano spat lava all over Pompeii. Houses were drowning in lava. Pompeii was dieing
Stephen, Shinwin o and Oliver
6:38
As the citizens of Liverpool were partying all night long, there was a volcanic island nearby. Suddenly, the volcano erupted and spread all over Liverpool. It shot out a ton of gigantic rocks covered in flame.
Olivia and Dilly
6:38
Just then I noticed that there was a modern city right below us. I realised that I need to at least save some people of Shanghai. But it was to late everything burnt and turned into ashes.
Jamillah and Phoebe
6:39
suddenly the canary, ochre rose volcano exploded the city was burnt in seconds
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