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Lena and Charlie
9:31
a dark cold mountain is were you clime no way down you look up and see freezing clouds. The snow on the. Mountain it is falling down you see a frozen lake you brake it and fall in it you clime out and run away.
Brian Alice
9:31
It’s the next day I climd up a humugis mouton I felt  firlis and brave and I new any thing is not wirfit then the poshun.
Joel and Kinga
9:31
We made it to the top of the mountain finally and we catch a glimpse of Benjamin. “Benjamin! Come here boy!” I shouted. But it was no use. I knew that because he was too far away to hear me. Lily the fairy flew over and lured Benjamin to me. I felt relieved but then I saw that lily had gone too far. Benjamin ran to catch her but she was to far then I lost Benjamin
Mr Shelton
9:32
After walking through the freezing mountain tops, you finally make it to a cabin.  How does it feel to arrive here?  Continue the story.
Lena and Charlie
9:34
nice one kinga and joel
Ella and artur
9:34
The old cold mountain just there
Skyla AND BOBBY
9:35 
It feels weird it smells like fog you here a wolf howling you look down you fell fluff there’s a wolf pup ! You take it it’s mother’s dead at your feet
Esther
9:35
I finally made it to the top of  Mount Everest.This is the biggest achievement I could make.I feel so proud,
Dean&Myles
9:35
As i could barley see in the dark I was thinking that something was going to gobble me up to shreds I started to tear up.I could see a white snowy cold looking mountain with wind blowing the delicate ice with a loud shatter from a cave on a mountain,I was going to climb it...
Ella r peace
9:35
l feel like amosnull and lonely worried because it is like it will claps on me .
Harriet Jake
9:35
I feel amazed and petrified and the snowy mountains touch the cloudy night sky
Lilie Cody
9:35
The next day from being stook in the mountains I found a cabin  I felt glorious and grateful so I knocked on the door and then I finally find my family
Ella and artur
9:38
The people walking  up to the mysterious cabin in the middle of nowhere
Brian Alice
9:38
i  am almost there I found a cosy warm cabin and you will not
Lena and Charlie
9:38
i like yours skyla and bobby
9:39
I was on the top of the moatin and I saw it in the distant I felt happy,food and full of energy!
Ella r peace
9:39
I made it to the pitch black mountain I was startled by the weather I carefully made my way towards the mountain I got cold so I made my way to to a mysterious cottage I rested
KD aja
9:39
So amazing I fell shokt I shan’t to go in but I cud not it is so cold out Sid but I when in eney way it was so worm I love.
Esther
9:39
I feel so accomplished.Going all this was and I made it.Such a beautiful home and the thick,soft snow in all around me.I also met an adorable snow fox on my way.I named her snowy,because her fur is as white as snow.This is an amazing trip and I am happy to start a new life here
Dean&Myles
9:39
As im as cold as ice I see this nice warm wooden and cosy cabin I was in relief I was rushing to go inside but there was beautiful light in the sky but there was howling so I ran as fast as I can inside before the hungry Wolfe’s eat me up in one gulp.
Daisy and Isla
9:40
On Christmas Eve night I when for a run in the forest until I found a cosy cottage all by its self I knocked on the frezzing cold door nobody answer so I got scared.
Skyla AND BOBBY
9:40
It feels joyful and worm and you walked into the door there’s Santa he says hooooohooo hello and gives you a present then leaves
Ella and artur
9:40
The old cabin in the middle of nowhere
Ella r peace
9:40
I was walking in this first and l sure a little coichj and it was amazing
Lilie Cody
9:40
She feel nice and warm I am glad I found the cabin
Lena and Charlie
9:40
Bye
Esther
9:40
I forgot my full stop at the end
Joel and Kinga
9:40
I suddenly felt a wave of fear take over me as I stood there, alone at the top of mount snow with no warmth. I realised that I was lost! I started trudging through the meter thick snow. I felt cold so cold I felt as if I was going to freeze. “I must keep going,” I muttered to myself “I must I must I must!” Then I saw some logs laid neatly in a pile. As I squinted I realised that it was right next to a wood cabin! For some reason I felt a burst of energy at the sight of this cabin. I ran towards it and knocked. I heard barking and lily’s small squeaky voice. Then the door opened and I found my family.
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