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9:10
i was waking and I when in the woods and I dskoved brit shining trees you carte fid you’re way home but you see a you are home you Mack friends and you no you belong
Lilie Cody
9:12
I have changed I to gigantic
Brian Alice
9:12
Ok sir
Ella r peace
9:12
This is ella r wans l walked in a florist and the where on the trees . And lights ports of grass . And a big pond it felt masculine.
Skyla AND BOBBY
9:12
It is dark then a glow flasing
Harriet Jake
9:12
The magic glowing night forest all of the trees glows in the night time water pours from the trees and the sky
Charlotte and Vincent
9:13
The small Sumer brew and lat Sumer chores .
Esther
9:13
An enchanted forest.A unusual looking light is beaming.The only thing around is a magical
Mr Shelton
9:15
You hop in a boat and sail along the lake towards the mountains.  Continue your descriptive story.
9:17
Challenge:  Think about your 5 senses.
Brian Alice
9:17
Dear diary as far as I went it was uooslus. until I saw the most amazing thing in my inter life.
Esther
9:17
An enchanted forest.A unusual looking light is beaming.The only thing around is magical trees and an extraordinary lake.
Joel and Kinga
9:18
Once I was on a walk with my dog Benjamin when we stumbled across a magical, enchanted forest with live fairies fluttering around. My dog barked playfully and attempted to catch the fairies in his small brown paws. It was late at night so I wanted to go back. I turned and started to walk but Benjamin was tugging at his leash and he broke free! Without hesitating I started running after him........
Mr Shelton
9:18
Wow.  Love it!
Lena and Charlie
9:18
you are climbing the mountains THEN you see a glow in the cave under your feet so you deside to go in then you see the forest.
Mr Shelton
9:19
Very nice, but don't forget those capital letters at the start.
Harriet Jake
9:21
All on your own and you feel banging on the boat and you feel petrified because you think that something is going to happen like you’re going to be attacked
Lena and Charlie
9:21
You hop into a boat and you see a shine at the huge mountains.You were very fersty so you get your filter and you filter the wharter and you can smell the solty whater finally you treech the end…
Ella r peace
9:21
@lso secretly he found a treasure orb after days it will turn to a shell and break open it had an orb ball a bouncy ball and then he decided to explore a bit longer
Brian Alice
9:22
I found a dirty old rusty boat in the lake that was next to the amazing place. I rode and rode until I saw a little mouton and dididid
Skyla AND BOBBY
9:22
You  arrive on sea use your boat to travel back to land .
Daisy and Isla
9:23
One day I got really bored at home  so I hopped on a orange amazing boat.I saw the foggy snowy mountains nearby so I headed towards there.While I was on my way I saw a scary massive shark so closs.I quickly headed back I thought I would of got  eaten but I made it back safely.
Mr Shelton
9:23
Amazing work girls!
Ella and artur
9:24
The brown wooden boat going trough the sea salt water
Mr Shelton
9:26
You make it to the mountain top.  How does it feel to be here?
Lena and Charlie
9:26
Your riding a boat and all of a sudden you crash into a volcano that is going to erupt any time so you run away on land and you find your self in a desert
Dean&Myles
9:26
As we are in are brown old small boat we were getting tired of rowing and rowing, until we saw this amazing peaceful waterfall with water gushing down it was the most wonderful thing it was very rocky with tall brown trees with the sun shining  over the tall,tall mountain I thought that we could stay here all day.
Lilie Cody
9:26
one day I went on a walk  with my dog through the forest and seen a lake so the next day I decided do go sailing and on the other side I suddenly seen a pitch black cave so I went inside and seen a path towards a entrance and I seen light so I went outside and it was a little village were people live and go shopping
Joel and Kinga
9:26
Once upon a time I was sailing across a beautiful long river sailing to the beautiful view of the mountains. I could see the lovely lake, I could smell the tall green grass back at the enchanted forest as I sailed towards the mountains. I could feel the wet, rippling waves in the lake. I was worried because Benjamin was still missing and the last time I had saw him was when I was chasing him through the forest to this lake. We saw him swimming towards the other side of the lake and run towards the mountains. I befriended the fairy that Benjamin tried to catch. I looked up and realised we had been in the forest ALL night!
9:27
Harriet and jake your sentences are AMAZING
Ella r peace
9:27
l was on a note trying to find my family and the was cabs and a big sun and the pond was crazy than l found my family
Skyla AND BOBBY
9:27
On a bout trying to find your way home you smell the rushing river
Charlotte and Vincent
9:28
The booty sun lit shins on the water
Esther
9:28
A large rock was right in front of my eyes as I was sailing towards it!I feared for my life as I had lost control of my boat and I couldn’t jump out because I didn’t know how to swim at all.Then I couldn’t risk anything and jumped into the ice cold water
Mr Shelton
9:29
Great atmosphere created Esther, well done.  Don't forget that final full stop.
Brian Alice
9:29
I found a dirty old rusty boat in the lake that was next to the amazing place. I rode and rode until I saw a little mouton and disidid I was going to spend the night there until I will find the magic ingredient
Ella and artur
9:29
The old dusty mountain just sitting still
KD aja
9:30
i Am Caring on my trailing on my Tripp I dskuvir the the bigstb mowtins inreech the top I am trefid
Cody drew
9:30
as the boat flotes though the watery dust
Lilie Cody
9:30
One day when I went sailing and  I crashed into a mountain it was very  cold and all off a sudden I seen a cave so I went into it and I couldn’t find my way back home I was shaking and nearly got frostbite
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