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Myles
2:03
He has got a old music player
Archie
2:03
They is allot of mysterious boxes and clocks
Katie
2:03
Hi tom mabey on your next posts you could use past sense
Thomas
2:03
the golf clubs are rusty (more then ornaments.)
heidi
2:03
The desk was old and really rusty and had cobwebs on the bottom
Kyle
2:03
The clock at the back is golden but there is no numbes.
Lee
2:03
There's a big clock in the back
Mrs Hamlin
2:03
Lee, your sentences could be longer.
Reece
2:03
Hi miss its reece
Archie
2:03
The old , misterous man was looking at the girl happily,and she smiled
heidi
2:03
The glissening shandeleea hung from the dusty cobwebed sieling .
Mrs Hamlin
2:04
The glistening chandelier hung from the dusty, cobwebbed ceiling .
Grace j
2:03
Charlie, maybe you should say more descriped words or more things about room.
lexie
2:04
Neena i really like youre sentence you could improve on making youre sentences a bit longer.
Joseph
2:04
The little girl said "I really like this book," The old man replied "Do you want me to tell you about it?" The girl shouted in excitement "YES!"
Mrs Hamlin
2:07
Excellent punctuation, Joseph!
Grace-A
2:04
The table stood in the middle of the room ,boxes of antique pottery and jewlery of all sorts were hidden away out of sight.
Connie
2:04
The lights are old fashond
Grace-A
2:04
Hi
Alfie
2:04
It could be in a abandond dunjun
Grace j
2:04
Heidi maybe use some new wird
Joseph
2:05
Hi
Nevaeh
2:05
Hi connie i agree the lights are old.
lexie
2:05
Alfie you could improve on putting full stops.
Deacon
2:05
The girl was very excited when she saw a book about snakes (her favourite animal)
Grace j
2:06
Heidi maybe you should use some new words insted of cobbwebs all the time
Kyle
2:06
Deacon you can improve by puting full stops.
Archie
2:06
The floor was as white as ice
Anthony
2:06
i like your sentence grace A
lexie
2:06
I like youre sentence Connie.
Lee
2:07
The man looks like he's been working in the libary for a long time because he looks. Old and he looks happy to work there because it looks. Like he's making everyone happy and he sells really kiddy books because. It looks like the girl is enjoying looking at all of them.
Neena
2:07
When the girl saw the book she was as happy as the golden sun
Connie
2:07
Thank you
Deacon
2:07
thanks kyle
Grace-A
2:07
Thank you Anthony
lexie
2:07
Youre welcome Connie
Grace-A
2:07
Neena good sentence
Lily
2:08
The old golf clubs stood stacked against eachother keeping eachother company inside the  very big ,red and gold bag.
Nevaeh
2:08
I like the way youn
lexie
2:08
I like the way you used Adverbs Lily.
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