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Lily
2:09
thank you alot Lexie
Katie
2:09
"Every new thing in this ancient shop is a other life taken off me.so i was wondering if you little girl could own the shop once i have gone"
lexie
2:09
Youre welcome Lily.
Lily
2:10
katie i like the way you act like you're the old man talking to the little girl.
Grace-A
2:10
Neena maybe you could add a bit more too your sentence and put more adjectives in it
heidi
2:10
The clock was golden and black with a patterned front glissening in the bright sunlight
Archie
2:10
The window was letting the magnificent , and breez into the old libary
Lee
2:10
The libary has the sun shining through and the whole libary looks orange
Reece
2:10
The old man looks abour
Neena
2:10
Thankyou grace
Harry
2:10
Joe I like the way you said ashtonished
Lee
2:10
And the window is really shiny when it's shining through because it looks all bright
Jeannie
2:10
The books were as old as the building.
Lewis
2:10
Nice sentence Lee
Grace j
2:10
Archie I like the way you use a smilie, but maybe you should add a little more information on the floor maybe like how it was cold or slipperly or wet .
Alfie
2:10
Archie maybe you could add more i love it up to now though
Reece
2:10
the old man wondered what the child was doing
Connie
2:10
I like the way you said golden sun instead of sun nevaeh
Neena
2:11
Lilly i like you sentence i like the way you said keeping eachother company inside the bag
heidi
2:11
Alfie yuor sentence could be longer
Deacon
2:11
I like your sentence lee
Kyle
2:11
I like the way lee put a long sentens with full stops
Anthony
2:11
The old man laughed at the book that the little girl picked
Nevaeh
2:11
I like the way Lexie used bracets to add more detail.
Joseph
2:12
The old chandelier hung from the ceiling just like the other small one near it.
Thomas
2:13
good sentence louie i like the way you said shiny and amused
Grace j
2:13
Anthony why did he laugh at the book the little girl picked?
Nevaeh
2:13
The young girl stood,glared and smiled at the old man.
Kyle
2:13
I realy like this sentens.The clock at the back is golden but no numbers
Deacon
2:13
The girl and her grandad were really close especially when they were in her house
lexie
2:13
Kyle you could add a bit more to youre sentence.
Charlie
2:13
Well done Lee for useing all of that punctuation
Grace-A
2:13
Archie i like the way you used a simalie
Reece
2:13
The man was about to grab a toffee
Neena
2:13
The shop was as old as these memories
Anthony
2:14
Because it had pigs dancing grace j
Archie
2:14
The window was letting the magnificent , and breez into the old , antique , cool libary
Mrs Hamlin
2:14
The window was letting the magnificent breeze into the old , antique , cool library.
Lily
2:14
I love you're sentence  Nevaeh i like how she glared then smiled at the old man
Joseph
2:14
I liked the way you used  an adverb Reece.
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