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Ryley
9:34
There once was a lonely boy named Harry Potter, he always gets treated badly by hi Uncle Vernon and Aunt Petunia.
Ethan R
9:34
Harry potter was siting down, and thinking about his long lost parents. He was sad and clueless how they died, but he hatted his new family.
Tyler
9:35
On one boring normal day, their was a boy called Harry potter who had a very hard life and was always locked in a room underneath the stairs.
Vlera
9:35
Harry is my name, nobody really listens to me but i'm used to it now...
kacie
9:36
SO it all started when duddley woke me up going WAKE UP HARY WAKE UP BANG BANG BANG.
JESSIE
9:36
HI
ethanc
9:36
This is when Harry potter lived with the dursleys and was all alone under the stairs staring at a wooden wall.
Evie
9:36
Its a dark night at the Durlsley's  house, Harry is hidden away in his dark , dusty lonely bed room under the stairs
Brody
9:36
This when Harry Potter when he lived with the Dursleys and he was basically a slave. He was always sleeping under the stairs and when Dudley woke up he woke up harry by jumping on the stairs.
BILLYJOE
9:36
There was once ,  a boy called Harry he was treated badly and ignored by Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernom.
Mia
9:36
As i waited for Dudley before we went to the car for his trip i was scared because uncle Vernon told me not any funny buiseness
Miss Williams
9:37
Mia, great start but don't forget your punctuation!
jac
9:37
So wan day a boy called harry got delivered to his aunt and uncles. But today was harry worst day [dudleys birthday]. As soon as dudley came down the stairs he shoved harry back into his room. He was angry😣😣
Miss Williams
9:38
Well done for using brackets Jac. Don't forget your capital letters and full stops.
Ryley
9:38
The Dursley's have a son named Dudley. Dudley normally bangs half way down the stairs sending dust down, waking him up.
Shannon
9:38
It was one ordinary day, when Harry no ordinary  boy. He sat there as usual watching Dudley slurp down his piping-hot soup ordering more.
Harvey HI
9:38
Harry potter is in his dusty  cubord .Uncle Vernon and  Anti Petuna are bulling him.  Dudley gives him all his clothes.
Evie
9:38
It was a dark morning in the Dursley's house , when Harry was thinking to himself  what to do under the old , dusty stairs also now as his "bedroom
Billyb
9:38
This is when harry lived with the Dursleys and was treated unfairly every morning Dudley jumped on the stairs and sent dust on Harry's face.
Cameron
9:38
it looks like he is lonely
Miss Williams
9:39
He does Cameron, Your'e right. Why do you think he is lonely?
Ethan R
9:39
Harry was really sad and then thought about his long lost parents,how did they die, did they really die. Thoughts ran down his head like a stream of water. He then got scared and then thought how will my life be at this rate...
Tyler
9:39
He had a very arrogant family who always bossed but this day was the worst. Harry had a very horrible, meen and very bossy cousin and it was his birthday and obviously he got spoiled like always he got spoiled.
ethanc
9:39
Every morning, dudley stepped on the floor with dust flowing in the air that stumbles up Harry's nose
Miss Williams
9:40
Lydia
9:40
On a miserable day at private drive I was in the basement waiting for my dinner whale Dudley was just steering at me whale he was eating his egg and bacon sandwich.
BILLYJOE
9:40
There was once , a boy named Dudley was getting most of the attention Harry was a lonely sad boy who had a bedroom full of spiders and dust it was under the stairs [a bad way to keep a bedroom]
Miss Williams
9:40
Well done Billy-Joe
Mikolaj
9:40
Long ago there was a little boy named harry he was waiting for his delicious hot beef jerky as it steems up he waited in his room under the staircase  finally the food
Miss Williams
9:40
Mikolaj what do we need after an adverbial?
Evie
9:41
On a cold , dusty night , Harry was under the stairs also now as his "bedroom" thinking to himself what to do because he wasn't allowed to leave his "room" but after thinking for to long...he fell asleep.
Miss Williams
9:41
Fantastic Evie!
Ella
9:41
There was once a lonely boy named Harry potter, he was a lonely boy.No one ever listened to him he had to sleep in an old,dusty  cupboard. His parents passed away nine years ago.
Miss Williams
9:41
Great noun phrase Ella
Vlera
9:41
I never enjoy being alone but I'm not as special as Dudley. It was dark in the cupboard. I wish i had my own bedroom then i could have toys!
Ryley
9:41
Everyday Harry is up early in the morning waiting to plate up the sizzling bacon.
JESSIE
9:41
harry is a wizard how live under the steers
Scott
9:41
As, i waited for my food i stared into the TV wiles Dudley 's eyes were glued to the bright gloomy screen    but luckly dudley didnt see
Miss Williams
9:42
Well done for using an apostrophe for possession!
Daisy
9:42
Harry always get treated unfairly. He wears Dudley's old rags and sleeps under the stairs with only spiders as his friends. His room is a dusty and is fit for an ant. He sits silently on his bed waiting for food...
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