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Miss Williams
9:42
Brilliant Daisy, keep going!
kacie
9:42
dust went all over the stairs harry coffing his brains out dudley was sat there whith piles full of bagon on his plate😮. harry was shocked meanwhille a letter came in the post it was for harry....
Miss Williams
9:42
Great picture in my head Kacie!
amyl
9:42
This is the wizard Harry potter he is not really popular. when he was born his mum and dad passed away so he has been living with his jealous aunt Petunia she was always jealous of her sister Harry's mother and then you have got the spoilt cousin Dudley he always gets what he wants. Then last but not lease you have uncle Vernon who always tries to make a good impression of himself .
Miss Williams
9:43
Great back story Amy, well done!
caleb
9:42
Once there lived a boy called Harry potter he never got treated the right way unlike Dudley...
Miss Williams
9:44
Great use of ellipsis
Tyler
9:43
But then about a hour later, loads and loads of mail came through the post box and the house was literally full of Hogwarts letters .
jac
9:43
Harry was relieved that all of his letters were flying through the dursleys house.
Kloe
9:43
hi i'm harry potter and i get treated very badly and i don't like living with uncle Vernon and aunt petunia  and Dudley . I hate living under the stairs  it is very dark and every morning Dudley stops on the stairs and bangs and shouts to me '' HARRY POTTER TIME TO GET UP '' when , i get out he always shuts the door on me , when he's running past .
Miss Williams
9:44
Well done for using dialogue
Shannon
9:43
With a smile that stuns, Harry grasped on to as many letters as he could making every moment count.
Cameron
9:43
He is finely happy with the Dudleys
Faith
9:43
I am forced to live in a spider-filled,dusty cupboard. My parents died nine years ago and now I live with aunt Petunia and uncle Vernon. I am treated unfairly they treat me like I'm an animal.
Isac
9:43
Once there lived a boy named Harry Potter, who was given to his Uncle Vernan and Aunt Petunia after his parents died in a car crash well, that's what he was told. His Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernan treated him horribly, but it was the opposite for Dudley. He was spoilt.
Brody
9:43
This is when all of the brown, black and white owls came into the street private drive and dropped of letters so he could come into  hogwarts
ethanc
9:43
Lately, loads of unfamiliar letters were flying through the old,decrepit house.
Miss Williams
9:46
Great use of the word decrepit
Vlera
9:43
All of a sudden, letters came flying in! "What could they be?" I questioned to myself. I stared at one of the letters gradually falling down. Hogwarts. The stamp looked familiar. Like my past.
Ryley
9:43
Harry is invited to be sent to Hogwarts School of Witch-Craft and Wizardy but Vernon goes mad and decides to move out of number 4 Privet Drive...
JESSIE
9:43
harry has 27 leters
Cameron
9:43
He looks hoppy
Ethan R
9:43
Harry was releaved from all these letters. He went hysterical, but when he heard his uncle shout he ran straight back under the stairs,( were Harry sleeps ) he then heard shouting and the ripping of paper...
Mia
9:44
As Harry was giving uncle Vernon his breakfast.In a flash a lot of letters shot out of the fireplace,Harry was shocked he saw a letter that was actually for him for once. Harry give it to uncle Vernon as he was shocked where the letter was from IT was from HOGWARTS SCHOOL OF WITCH CRAFT AND WIZARDRY
Evie
9:45
On very happy day , Harry potter had revived so many letters he couldn't breath! they all came swooping in the house and as soon as Harry opened on...he was accepted to Hogwarts! to Harry's surprise a man called Hadgrid   kicks his door down at the down stairs part and takes him away!!
brendan
9:45
It would be no surprise to harry
jac
9:45
Uncle vernon has gone mad because he does NOT want Harry to go to hogwarts
Tyler
9:45
As an other day passed, it was time for the dursleys and potters holiday for Dudleys birthday.
JESSIE
9:45
you are  wizarde  harry
Miss Williams
9:46
What does Harry's name need?
Shannon
9:46
With his baggy close drooping down he screamed with joy as Dudley screamed mortifide.
Scott
9:46
suddenly, millions of letters flew out of the chimney the Dudley's screamed in fear wilse harry admired them thinking in his head "will i be able to read one letts give it a try".
Miss Williams
9:46
Brilliant Scott!
Daisy
9:46
The letters glided round the room like hundreds of bees and joy and excitement filled Harry's heart. A huge smile took over his face.
Ethan R
9:46
Capital letters Miss.
Kloe
9:46
Harry potter is very happy when he gets all the letters but everyone else  is very mad  because they are letters inviting harry to Hogwarts
kacie
9:46
uncle vernom grabed the letter and to it of him and the look on his face was mind blowing "OH WHAT WAS THAT FOR GIVE IT EAR " SHOUTED HARRY THE NEXT DAY...
jac
9:47
I am glad I am not Harry
Miss Williams
9:47
BILLYJOE
9:47
Once there was , a boy called Harry once he heard a mention of Hogwarts he said please take me there but they took no notice of him what so ever so one stormy night a man broke down the Dudleys door and he was called Hagrid then the Dudleys heard the door crash down so they rushed downstairs and Harry opened the door and said WOW lots of letters for me to go to Hogwarts Wizardy craft Aunt Petunia was scared Dudley was like whats happening and Uncle Vernom was too angry.
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