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Abhinav and Margaret
8:05
following my footsteps repeatedly, my heart was in my throat. An odour filled my nose, making a instinctive reaction. A person lurked in the grey, dull walls.
sama-Bahaa
8:05
As I stepped in the first thing I smelt was litter. I felt disgusted and my tummy started to growl.
kasper anexia
8:05
I stepped out of the house.As I walked to find daylight,I saw a man lurking in the shadows...He was expecting me.
Mabior and Stacy
8:05
I quickly made a move as a Rat ran past
Mr Joel
8:03
Stacy and Mabior - tell me how you would react to this.
Mabior and Stacy
8:02
As i entered the everlasting hell, an intense gas entered my lungs and could not make it's way out
Abhinav and Margaret
8:02
I thought the inside was bad, someone  was looking for me in the darkness. My life was at state. It looked like the place was just on fire only i knew what was behind me and who lived here.
kristian and anjola
8:01
As we stepped into the darkness. We heared screems of dead. The smell was so vicious , it even took over our mind. We saw dead bodies laying under the bed and felt the dark load
Adam Anna
7:59
The inside of the house was grubby,mucky and unclean the noises where like bats screaming in the hidden , unknown ,creepy house.
Saja Emilia
7:59
The wall paper was damp and it was starting to come of the dirty wall.Day by day ,the wall would look even  worser.
Seth
7:58
The deserted house, was waiting for it's next opponent, it waited... until it was time.
Mr Joel
7:58
Kacper and Anexia. How could you describe this smell without saying I smelt.
kasper anexia
7:57
As I looked around while drawing my finger across the walls,I smelt a horrible smell of fire burning.
shaun&lillymay
7:57
I stepped into the blood-curdling house, holding my breath and peeking with my eyes...
Mr Joel
7:57
Sama and Bahaa, A lovely sentence. how did this make you feel?
sama-Bahaa
7:57
As we stepped into the house, the wallpaper was ripped of the walls and the bed was like it was washed in some mud. I could hear the tap open and smelt like rotten eggs.
Mabior and Stacy
7:56
The door opened with an all mighty creek...
Saja Emilia
7:55
Inside the house,mud and old clothes scatted around the bed smelt like old sweat.
Mabior and Stacy
7:55
I took a deep breath and covered my nose and made the step in
sama-Bahaa
7:54
The tree stood like a statue under the shiny moon with stars around it.
Mabior and Stacy
7:54
The stars shone and twinkled in the majestic and mysterious sky.
kasper anexia
7:54
All the days and all night the abandoned house as all the animals run passed.
kristian and anjola
7:54
far far away in the forest , in the abandoned house , creepy shadows were lurking , as the darkness  came they looked for souls...
Abhinav and Margaret
7:53
Waving their hands of branches, an abandoned shack filled with dark mist lay in the deepest part of the forest.
Mabior and Stacy
7:53
The woods were scattered about making it nearly impossible to move.
Saja Emilia
7:53
The abendend cottage stood in the middle of Neverland surrounded by the tall trees.
sama-Bahaa
7:53
In the middle of the forest, the abandoned house was surrounded by thousand of trees.
kasper anexia
7:53
Abandoned,broken, the animals wouldn't dare come near...
Maja/tony
7:52
in a forest full of emptynes there stud a dark caben stud in the middle of nowhere
Mr Joel
7:51
7:49
Adam and Anna - Rewrite this sentence so that it doesn't start with the.
Adam Anna
7:48
The old house was standing in shadows , in the forest full of emptiness .
Mr Joel
7:48
Tony and Maja - this is a very strange sentence.
Maja/tony
7:48
It was a vary dark and misty morning. The small, little hut was hiding  its chicken lags.
Seth
7:47
Deep in a damp,gloomy,hellish forest, a busted and boarded up shed. Know one will know who lived there...
Mr Joel
7:47
Sama and Bahaa, can you flip the sentence around to started with the fronted adverbial.
sama-Bahaa
7:47
The abanded ,old house ,in the middle of the forest, was surrounded by thousands of trees.
shaun&lillymay
7:47
The moon was a huge ball of wonder.
Seth&Ria
7:46
The majestic moon glistened, while the tree's leaves pranced in the breeze of the wind.
Adam Anna
7:46
The spine chilling creepy house lurked in the shadows.
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