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Mr Joel
7:46
Saja and Emilia, think about your tense.
Saja Emilia
7:45
The abendend cottage layed in the middle of Neverland scattered by trees and trash.
Mabior and Stacy
7:44
The stones nestled in between my toes giving me an unpleasant feeling in my shoes
Mr Joel
7:44
Mabior and Stacy. Please finish off this sentence.
Mabior and Stacy
The stone nestled between the toes of
7:43
Beneath the grass, laid a creature...
Maja/tony
7:43
The majestic moon risen over the dark tree
Abhinav and Margaret
7:42
With the sun's eyes, the moon was sailing beyond the sky. Trees were ever so beautiful, basking like lions.
kristian and anjola
7:38
The ghostly moon, hollowed over the bronze field.
kasper anexia
7:37
As the moon light shone,the sky lit up.
Mr Joel
7:36
I love this subordinate conjunction Seth and Ria. Can you change this sentence around so that it starts with the subordinate clause.
Seth&Ria
7:36
The majestic moon glistened, while the tree's leaves froliced
Mr Joel
7:36
Use some description. Rather than what you can see
7:35
Tony and Maya.
Maja/tony
7:35
It is a very dark and misty night ,creepy :)
Mabior and Stacy
7:35
The Sun was down and the stood tall as the breeze proceed through the leaves
Adam Anna
7:35
The moon risen over the purple moor.
shaun&lillymay
7:34
The majestic moon moved in the moonlight and the trees swayed in the wind.
Saja Emilia
7:34
The tree was as tall as a skyscraper under the magestic sun.
Mr Joel
7:34
Lovely sentence Abhi and Margaret. Can you think of another sentence that starts without using the.
Abhinav and Margaret
7:33
The basking tree smothered the moon's last rays of eternal light.
kristian and anjola
7:33
The ghostly moon , hollowed over the bronze field.
Mr Joel
7:32
Mabior and Stacy, I love this sentence can you think of another word for travelled.
Mabior and Stacy
7:31
The Sun was down and the tree stood tall as the breeze traveled through the leaves
Mr Joel
7:27
7:25
shaun&lillymay
7:24
Morning Mr Joel, how is your day?
Mr Joel
7:22
Seth&Ria
7:19
Good Morning to you Mr Joel!
sama-Bahaa
7:19
Good  morning how are you.
Abhinav and Margaret
7:19
Good morning sir! How are you this morning because it is so nice. The sun is coolio.
Saja Emilia
7:19
Good morning.
kacper anexia
7:19
Yo sir
Mabior and Stacy
7:19
Good morning from Stacy and Mabior
kristian and anjola
7:19
good morning too
adam, anna
7:19
good morning mr joel
Mr Joel
7:09
Good morning year 5!
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