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Live Writing Session

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David Mitchell

11:48

Raihan and Sajjad - Sinister is a great word! It tells me a lot! Radiant and bright mean the same. Which one is best?

Mariya B and Hussain

11:48

The moon was shining in the dark sky whilst the hut was very cosy and warm.

Zayan and Kulsum

11:48

The moon was as bright as the sun rays.

David Mitchell

11:48

Mariya B and Hussain - Can you think of a word to insert before 'moon'?

Eman and Abdullah

11:48

The burning flames were shooting up into the gloomy night sky.

Mahanoor

11:48

The sky was dark. The bright moon was shining above wooden ramshackle. With the wreck being in the middle of a field, everything felt eerie and I felt as if the freezing wind was trying to tell me to go back with the way it was pushing me.

Maariya , Ahad

11:48

The moon lit the spooky forest giving an image haunted house.

David Mitchell

11:49

Mahanoor - Great! Now tell me about the flames.

Faiz and Saleeka

11:49

The wooden bungalow stood in the middle of the field hoping friends would come . The scarlet , vermillion flames lit the house making it look like a pleasant place . The full moon awoke the wolves and their howls fill the air.

MUBARRA AND SOFIA

11:49

I can see the stars shining like jewels though the dark, eerie sky.

Esa and Gift

11:49

Millions of stars lit the night and the bright moon hung steadily in the sky, watching as the rising flames ate away at the poor house and everything around it.

Amberin and Devon

11:49

Trapped in my room, I didn't even know that my house was ablaze but as it went on burning I grew more curios until my door opened and my room was engulfed in thick, black smoke followed by red, boiling flames.

Emily and Safa

11:49

The dark night sky is blending its self in with the blinging stars from above ,the moon mysteriously growing and the fire as bright as the day light .

Raihan and Sajjad

11:49

The sinister building stood in front of the radiant,blue moon

David Mitchell

11:50

Amberin and Devon - Great first word! I like how you have used one word to get me thinking! Engulfed is also a superb choice!

Emily and Safa - How did that make you feel?

Zayan and Kulsum

11:50

The house was as gloomy as the night sky on a frozen ,wintery night.

Faiz and Saleeka

11:50

The galaxy sky lit the air and the many stars made it welcoming.

Breshna and Ahmad

11:50

The bright grey moon and shining little stars in the dark black sky.

David Mitchell

11:51

Breshna and Ahmad - How did you feel as the character stood there?

Amberin and Devon

11:51

Thank you for your motivating feedback, Mr Mitchell!!!

Esa and Gift

11:51

Raihan and Sajjad- Great use of personification

Mahanoor

11:51

Faiz and Saleeka - The way you used 'Galaxy sky' really puts you in the setting! Good job!

David Mitchell

11:51

Great feedback Mahanoor!

Muhammad-Q and Sandor

11:51

The lonely cottage burned on it's own as the people who set it off ran. Ran past the hills, past the quiet motorway into an abandoned mansion that had been left for dead. The starry night stood still, waiting for something to happen, to change lives. All the men had run away except for one, the youngest of them all. The one that felt sorry!

Zayan and Kulsum

11:51

The creepy , empty house was as still as a tree's root.

Amina and Hafsa

11:51

The menacing haunted building stood in front of the illuminated, dazzling moon.

Faiz and Saleeka

11:52

The sinster building stood there hoping it could intrigue people.

David Mitchell

11:52

Amina and Hafsa - Menacing is a great choice of word!

MUBARRA AND SOFIA

11:52

I can smell the burning wood as I walk through the spooky house.

Rebeka and Ayesha

11:52

As the shinning moon ,lit up the gloomy, night sky the cosy house was warmed by fire.

Eman and Abdullah

11:52

The burning flames were shooting up into the galaxy night sky

Emily and Safa

11:52

It made us feel intimidated and it made us feel like we were actually there.

Raihan and Sajjad

11:52

The purple plants looked as if they were trying to penetrate the wooden wall.

David Mitchell

11:52

Emily and Safa - Now put the two sentences together for me.

11:53

Raihan and Sajjad - Can you think of another word for 'trying'?

Esa and Gift

11:53

Zayan and Kulsum- I like the way you used synonyms

Mariya B and Hussain

11:53

The radiant, bright moon was shining as the stars filled the night sky.

David Mitchell

11:53

Eman and Abdullah - Shooting is a great choice of word!

Zayan and Kulsum

11:53

The flames lit up the gloomy night sky.

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