JotCast | Live Writing Session

Live Writing Session

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David Mitchell

12:09

Mariya B and Hussain - GREAT!!

Amina and Hafsa

12:09

I was deceased when I had I perceived that the vermillion lava had covered the forest floor. I felt dead...

Emily and Safa

12:09

As the volcano erupted we erupted with fear .

Muhammad-Q and Sandor

12:09

They felt scared, lost in panic. No one could save them they had to find their own way.

Esa and Gift

12:09

Breshna and Ahmed - I like the description

Mahanoor

12:09

Faiz and Saleeka - I love how you used the simile, 'The grass looked like as if it was climbing the volcano!'

MUBARRA AND SOFIA

12:09

We could see the unpredictable volcano waiting to explode.

David Mitchell

12:09

MUBARRA AND SOFIA - Love the word 'unpredictable'!

Eman and Abdullah

12:09

The eruptive volcano as its lava traveled in and out of the volcano which lit up the gloomy night sky.

Fatima and Muhammad

12:09

The angry volcano erupted as it destroyed all means of life down below.

Faiz and Saleeka

12:09

I was deceased when I had I perceived that the vermillion lava had covered the forest floor. I felt worried.....

Esa and Gift

12:10

Faiz and Saleeka- I like the way you used dialuge

Raihan and Sajjad

12:10

The lava ran as if trying to burn the terrified people.

Mahanoor

12:10

Mubarra and Sofia - The word 'Unpredictable' is really strong! Good job!

Amberin and Devon

12:11

To see the top of the volcano I had to bend my neck so much it was like I was trying get my head to touch my back!

Muhammad-Q and Sandor

12:11

Can the villagers save them selves from the village's extinction?

Maariya , Ahad

12:11

A massive volcano towering over the city . "I'm about to erupt in 5 4 3 2 1," lava was gushing out .

Zayan and Kulsum

12:11

The volcano stood still like nothing had ever happened.

Emily and Safa

12:11

We where speechless!

Esa and Gift

12:11

Raihan and Sajjad- Good personification

Mahanoor

12:12

Good job everyone!

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