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Mahanoor

12:01

Breshna and Ahmad - Nice description!

Amberin and Devon

12:02

I sat breathless. I had escaped! The chair creaked and the wind howled. Then I noticed the strange writing on the almost-crumbling wall. "You are next," I read this in my head but there was a voice unlike mine that also said it. I turned to the direction where it came from and a hooded figure sat in the corner holding something that shimmered in the sun.

Muhammad-Q and Sandor

12:02

"Help!" He cried. What would his retched brothers do next?

Faiz and Saleeka

12:02

The greasy wallpaper made it look as someone had puked on it. The concrete floor made it look like someone had ripped the rug of the floor. "Help me " cried the chair and the table .

David Mitchell

12:02

Zayan and Kulsum

12:02

The dull walls that had been covered in dust looked like it had never been cleaned before.

Eman and Abdullah

12:02

i was dead in the water when i realized that my house had been bombed.

Mahanoor

12:02

Raihan and Sajjad - I love how you used ellipsis!

Esa and Gift

12:02

Raihan and Sajjad- very powerful

Emily and Safa

12:04

Our mouths droped to the floor and our eyes took of to the sky!

Esa and Gift

12:04

Eman and Abdullah- Don't forget capital letters!

Zayan and Kulsum

12:04

The ashes that fell from the rock, solid volcano burned the earths atmosphere.

Amberin and Devon

12:04

There stood a vast, towering volcano studded with rocks making paths for the flowing, dangerous lava.

Rebeka and Ayesha

12:04

Making an eerie noise, the wallpaper slowly peeled, the desolate house being wrecked.

Amina and Hafsa

12:04

The deserted villa stood there alone its disquieting its smirk worse than ever. The scintillating, vermillion flames set alight the inside of the abandoned house.

MUBARRA AND SOFIA

12:04

I can see the lonely volcano waiting to show how powerful he is!

Raihan and Sajjad

12:04

The volcano burped and a jet of fiery, red lava burst out from the top.

Mahanoor

12:05

Zayan and Kulsum - Woah! That's really good!

Amberin and Devon - I really liked how you used the word 'vast!'

Muhammad-Q and Sandor

12:06

The villagers could not believe their eyes. It was happening. They had to run. The moon was feasting his eyes on these pathetic people panicking. He laughed a great big laugh. He was triumphant! AGAIN!!!

Faiz and Saleeka

12:06

The mountainous , gargantuan volcano started to puke it dinner out. The full moon made it look like a scene but in reality people were running and screaming to get as far away as possible.

Mariya B and Hussain

12:06

As the moon shone on the hot red lava, the ashes flaked of the rock.

Mahanoor

12:06

Faiz and Saleeka - I love how you used the word 'gargantuan!@

David Mitchell

12:06

Mariya B and Hussain - of or off? I like the word flaked!

Emily and Safa

12:06

This sort of a giant was so tall it could almost touch the sky. The moon was vast and bright it almost blinded me the volcano was about to erupt and the neon lava was pouring out we couldn't belive our eyes!!!

Rebeka and Ayesha

12:06

As the vermillion lava crept up the hilly volcano, the liquid came shooting up!

Breshna and Ahmad

12:06

The tall solid volcano erupted with the red flams coming out of the steaming hole.

MUBARRA AND SOFIA

12:06

Our bodies shivered as the flames flew near us.

Zayan and Kulsum

12:06

The steaming lava covered the forest floor leaving remains of life.

Amberin and Devon

12:06

"Wow, look at this!" I cried. I took a picture on my camera. I looked closely at the picture and I noticed flashing lights. They were using Morse code! I understood and drove at their direction, I was going to be their new hero!

David Mitchell

12:07

Amberin and Devon - Love this!

Muhammad-Q and Sandor

12:07

The people ran for their lives!

Mahanoor

12:07

Amberin and Devon - Good job for using dialogue!

David Mitchell

12:07

Muhammad-Q and Sandor - How were they feeling?

Muhammad-Q and Sandor

12:07

None knew what to do!

Mariya B and Hussain

12:08

As the moon shone on the hot red lava, the ashes flaked off the rock.

Faiz and Saleeka

12:08

The grass looked like it was climbing the volcano to get a better view.

Zayan and Kulsum

12:08

Once there was growth and life in the forest but now just dark and lonely with no remains of growth and happiness.

Amberin and Devon

12:08

Survivors from the flood of lava shouted, cried and screamed trying to save themselves from the next dangerous eruption.

Breshna and Ahmad

12:08

The dark red fire coming out of the volcano spreading through the tree's.

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