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Monday Jotcast 6/4/2020
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Mr Joel
3:45
How will you hook your reader in from the start and
then build tension in order to keep them engaged?
Will you tell the reader everything that happens or
leave the ending to the reader’s imagination?
Olivia
3:45
Okay I will do that for English tomorrow.
Mr Joel
3:45
I've got all that you have written so far.
Mr Joel
3:45
Use it and edit it if needed.
Mr Joel
3:46
Olivia -
Searching for their next victim, the pesky shark, spots their next victim, their thoughts are so sincere who know what thoughts they have.
With no care in the world, apart from myself of course I suddenly feel more relaxed by the minute, glaring up at the sun I feel grateful for my life. As I immerse, my hands into the water they begin to feel hydrated.
As this sinister creature, who is used to the water, made its first attempt to strike at its victim, didn't succeed due to the kayak, sailing diagonally and this mighty sea creature was too busy thinking about how this human would taste.
Ellice
3:46
Unaware of what unexpected danger  she was coming for him the canoeist enjoyed his time carelessly he dropped his phone off bored without calling for help you soon realise he wasn't alone he wasn't going to come out alive
Mr Joel
3:50
Ellice -
Enjoying the sunshine, I was sitting in my canoe no negative thoughts ran through my head it was just me and the Hawaiian sea's.
Unaware of what unexpected danger that was coming for him. The canoeist enjoyed his time alone. Carelessly he dropped his phone over board. Without being able to call for help, he soon could realise he wasn't alone. Maybe he wasn’t going to come out of this alive.
Mr Joel
3:51
Ellice - use the model. I'll post this to Seesaw so that you can see it.
Mr Joel
3:51
Ok - it's time for me to go.
3:52
Thank you so much for your participation. Amazing work.
Olivia
3:52
Ok bye!
Ellice
3:52
BYE👋
Stay safe
Mr Joel
3:52
You too.
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