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Malakye and Lola
2:28
Grace i like your writing because it gets very tense.
Phoebe and Layla
2:28
The bright moon surrounded by mist disappearing in the distance.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:28
Grace - Your sentence about the volcano could be played around with... What about:

Rumbling in hunger, the volcano...

Would that be better?
Malakye and Lola
2:27
I was so scared i fell backwards and gott helped up by my freind and I sprinted for my life.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:27
Tarley and Luke - Why was it so good?
Tarley and Luke
2:27
That's really good Riley and Simon.
Lucas and Kian
2:26
Kyle and Khobi this is how you spell knocked.
Demi and Amelia
2:26
The air was burning as it hit my face, my heart was beating so fast I thought I was going to have a heart attack.
Grace
2:26
As they walked further, they froze in fear of what they saw. They were thinking " Where did this come from?" There thought it was a dream so they blinked there eyes, but they were still there. So they looked up at the dark blue, reflecting sky. The moon was a full moon. It was bright and shiny and clear to see from a mile away. The volcano was rumbling like was hungry and wanted food, as you looked up lava come rushing down. The lava was a hot red colour. The wind was blowing on the volcano and made some white, clear air.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:26
Lewis and Tyler - I love the simile you have used! Well done! I don't think you need the commas in your first sentence. Well done!
Kyle,Khobi
2:25
As I ran I saw all the trees burning and being kncked down.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:25
Malakye and Lola - How did it make you feel? How did your body react?
Malakye and Lola
2:25
I was petrified as the lava blew into the air.
Riley and Simon
2:25
The Volcano erupted as lava drop down heading toward settlements! And the breese blew the smokey fog in the dark blue sky. And down in the settlements the lava terarised the surondings buildings.
Lewis and Tyler
2:24
The blood,red hot,lava was as hot as the sun and a medior shower.The rumbiling of the volcano was like a gigantic tornado. The massive village at the bottom of the volcano was burning. The volcano was starting to erupt...
Tarley and Luke
2:24
The nice, cold breeze was blowing the steam off the hot erupting volcano
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:24
Freddie and Connor - Well done for using your sense of smell!
Freddie and Connor
2:24
The air smelt like sut burning down with a mixture of glossy lava.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:24
Brendan and Jesse - Were you close to the lava? Tell me more!
Brendan and Jesse
2:23
As the boiling hot lava was flowing swiftly down the side of the volcano as i was burning to death!!!
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:23
Kyle and Khobi - What did the lava do to the trees?
Kyle,Khobi
2:23
The volcano poured with lava destroyed the trees that surrounded it.
Brendan and Jesse
2:23
As the boiling hot was flowing swiftly down the side of the volcano as i was burning to death!!!
Jasmine & Jami
2:22
As i looked beside me,my friend was in fear I held her close as we ran away from it as fast as we could, we were both scared for our lives and we feared to look back so we never did, my friend coudn't stand not looking back so we stopped and looked at the volcano errupting in the air as it started to over heat!!!
Lucas and Kian
2:22
As I walked closer i felt and heard the collosule volcano erupt
Malakye and Lola
2:22
I could feel the boiling liquid seeping under the ground and coming straight for me. I had no way to escape from this mess.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:22
Lots of punctuation missing - Keep concentrating and check things before you submit it!
Phoebe and Layla
2:22
The boling hot magma emerged from the top of the erupting volcaino.
Brendan and Jesse
2:22
As the boiling hot was flowing swiftly down the side of the volcano
Lucas and Kian
2:22
As I walked closer I heard and felt the rumble of the collosule
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:22
Lewis and Tyler - I like the word rumbling. Could you add a simile to describe what it was rumbling like?
Lewis and Tyler
2:21
The volcano was erupting red boiling lava and the ground was rumbling like an earthquake.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:21
Demi and Amelia - I love how you have described the lava as blood red! Tell me more!
Demi and Amelia
2:20
The blood red lava rushed down the crumbling volcano.
Ellie and Lacey
2:20
As lava dripped down the large rock . i can feel the rumble underneeth my expensive shoes trees swaying people running and leaving town.as wolves howl at the deadly full moon
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:20
Malakye - I like it in stories when people predict things as it usually means it isn't going to happen. Can you escape?
Malakye and Lola
2:20
I could already see myself burning to DEATH ...
Freddie and Connor
2:20
The air tastes like bitter and when you touch the walls they are so damp that they make your hands freezing.
Brendan and Jesse
2:20
The small creepy dark doll figure approached outside the dark, gloomy cave it was chuckies Girlfriend
Grace
2:19
As I walked further I could hear drip drop from the damp, cold walls: "I wonder what it is?" I said calmly in my head.
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Hi Lewis and Tyler
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Lewis and Tyler
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And the people in the village was burning because of the red hot lava was pouring on them...
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