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Lewis and Tyler
2:19
As she walked slower than a snail she quickly turned arouned she heard something it was like a whining girl she was very spooked and ran out the tunnel...
Phoebe and Layla
2:19
The dark flickering lights shimerd in the endless tunnel.
Jasmine & Jami
2:19
As the silhouette walked farther and farther away from me and my friend, we slowly walked away in line with the girl's back and as i looked behind me the shadowy figure had disappeard...and we never looked back...
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:17
Malakye and Lola
2:16
I would cry if I ever saw such a demonic figure infront of me.
Freddie and Connor
2:16
The  air tasted l
Riley and Simon
2:16
Good Work Every
Grace
2:16
As I walk further, I hear drip drop coming from the damp, filthy walls: I wonder what it is?  I thought camly in my head.
Lucas and Kian
2:16
The young girl could hear demonic voices in her head.
Brendan and Jesse
2:16
When i touched the gloomy caves walls i felt a damp soggy slimy goowy substance, and it was warm inside that substance , it was VERY unusual...
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:16
Demi and Ameila - Good suspense. Try not to tell the reader that the tunnel is creepy. Can you describe it in a way that makes the reader think it is creepy?
Demi and Amelia
2:15
As I walked down the creepy tunnel I saw a stange silouette within the distance, then she turned around ...
Lewis and Tyler
2:15
Well Done Malakye and Lola.
Phoebe and Layla
2:15
The dark , tunnel had small flickering lights.
Tarley and Luke
2:15
The tiny young girl was hearing strange noises with no one around the dark, gloomy tunnle
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:15
Elle and Lacey - What did you like about it?
Ellie and Lacey
2:15
Freddie and Connor nice work.
Lewis and Tyler
2:15
The dark,damp rocky walls were freezingly wet.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:15
Kyle and Khobi - What did you like about their writing? Tell them.
Kyle,Khobi
2:14
Well done Malakye and Lola
Ellie and Lacey
2:14
All that was left of the girl was her spirits silouette . the walls where damp rats running over my cold wet feet .
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:14
Malakye and Lola - I'm loving this! Could you add how this made you feel if you were a character in this story?
Malakye and Lola
2:13
The silouette of the demonic girl sent shivers down my spine. We could smell blood and we could see water dripping slowly off the roof. We could her a little girls scream which sounded like when a baby does not get what it wants.
Kyle,Khobi
2:13
The young sillowet female slowley creaped down with a spine tingling feeling while water was dripping on he all the way
Riley and Simon
2:13
The black, dark fireaky figure walked through damp mistiveus tunel.As the light flickerd off and on revealling the younge posse
Freddie and Connor
2:13
This looks like a serial  killer that is waiting to come for you......be careful when your asleep they are coming for you.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:13
Lewis and Tyler - What if you started that sentence differently? What about...

Walking very slowly...

Would that make it better?
Lewis and Tyler
2:12
The girl was walking very slowly she saw a figger appear she said" Its so so smelly and desgusting.
Lucas and Kian
2:12
The damp,disgusting tunnel had weird slime down the walls.
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2:12
Tarley and Luke - What did you like about their writing?
Ellie and Lacey
2:12
The young poor girl walked through the deep dark cave only being able to see her silouet as you wonderd. where she is going she saw a shodow...
Tarley and Luke
2:12
Well done Jasmine and Jaimi.
Kyle,Khobi
2:11
The buildings wallpaper was teared into micro scafic peices.
Kyle,Khobi
2:11
The desestated building was left in tears when it looked at itself         its skin was decaying over time wen
Ellie and Lacey
2:11
ghosts roming around the house sitting in the chair that ...
Lucas and Kian
2:11
The walls slowly rotted away as the doors fell apart.
Grace
2:11
The depressing room was as dirty as mud.
Phoebe and Layla
2:11
The lonely krucked chaire sat in the derserted house.
Lewis and Tyler
2:08
If somebody lived there they would  run out screaming help me!!.
Demi and Amelia
2:08
After the fire,the wallpaper unpealed from the ruined walls.
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Freddie and Connor
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Hi Lewis and Tyler
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Tarley and Luke
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Good afternoon
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Tarley and Luke
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Good afternoon
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Brendan and Jesse
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ok
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hi
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BRuh
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Lewis and Tyler
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And the people in the village was burning because of the red hot lava was pouring on them...
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