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LucasM and John
2:00
In the deep, thick mist, you can only just see the Lake!
Bobby,Lucas S
2:00
The dark,calm blue water is flowing softly through the winters day.
Ashleigh Haydar
2:00
Where hugging each other over the bright blue river.
Harvey+Amelia
2:00
It wrapped around the gathered trees.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:00
Lilymae and Piotr
2:02
The long blue calm water, was going slowly through the rocks.
LucasM and John
2:02
The still Lake was very cold and dark.
Isabella and Eva
2:02
The big, sliver, full moon shined in the dark sky.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:03
Lucas and John - You could play about with that sentence. What about...

Still, cold and dark, the lake whispered to the trees.
John
2:03
Hi, have a great afternoon. I am in North Yorkshire having a day off.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:03
Thank you John -  Great to see you taking part.
Charlotte and Holly
2:03
The flames from the fire was as tall as a mountain.
Isabella and Eva
2:03
The dark, blue sky had purple, white stars in the sky.
Ashleigh and Haydar
2:03
The burning house was shining in the moon light.
Daniel and Saverio
2:03
The old, wooden house, is set on fire with warm flames.
Lydia and Nathan
2:03
The white,silver moon looked sadly down at the old,burning house.
Bobby,Lucas S
2:03
The large moon is blazing on the burning house to ashe
Harvey+Amelia
2:03
The full moon shone brightly on the haunted house.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:04
Lydia and Nathan - Can you think of another world for 'looked'?
Lilymae and Piotr
2:04
The huge flames,burned  the house, in the dark of night.
LucasM and John
2:04
In the dark night, you approach an abandoned house on fire underneath the spooky moon!
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:04
Lilymae and Piotr - What noises could you hear?
Kieran and Owen
2:04
The blazing, abandoned house was settled underneath the bright white moon
Isabella and Eva
2:04
The old, brown, abandoned house, was lit with orange and yellow flames!
Lily-jo and Jessica
2:04
The spooky,haunted house is creepy and could fall down any minute!
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:05
Kieran and Owen - A great sentence! 'Settled' makes me think everything is calm. Can you think of a different word to make your sentence more dramatic?
Bobby,Lucas S
2:05
The moon is blazing on top of the burning house is lighting up the sky.
Ashleigh and Haydar
2:05
The spooky house was shambling in flames!
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:05
Ashleigh and Haydar - What could you hear?
Lilymae and Piotr
2:05
We could hear the owels loudly tweeting in the dark sky.
Lydia and Nathan
2:05
Here is our answer Mr.Mitchell- The white,silver moon stared sadly at the old,burning house.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:06
Lydia and Nathan - Thanks for replying! I LOVE that improvement!
Bobby,Lucas S
2:06
The bright, spooky moon sets the wolves howling through the night sky.
LucasM and John
2:06
You can hear a crunch under your feet as you walk towards the house that is on fire.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:06
Bobby and Lucas - I love that you have included the wolves! Are they coming?
Harvey+Amelia:)
2:06
We could hear the owls tweeting and the house burning.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:07
Harvey and Amelia - What other words for 'tweeting' could you use?
Lydia and Nathan
2:07
Thank you!,
Lilymae and Piotr
2:09
The lonely moon sat in the dark cloudy sky .
LucasM and John
2:09
The flame is as loud as lions roar!
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