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Isabella and Eva H
2:29
It sounded like a growling bear. Our reply to Mr. Michell!
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:30
Isabella and Eva - That is SO MUCH better!! Well done!
Lydia and Nathan
2:30
Mr.Michell here is what would go before our recent sentence- As all the birds were frantically flying of the trees we started to think something was wrong... but we didn’t know what.
Kieran and Owen
2:30
As the famous, active volcano, Mount Etna erupted vigorously, the land nearby shook, knocking many people off their feet making massive bruises on their bodies.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:31
Lydia and Nathan - That is such an improvement. It's making me as the reader want to carry on!
Bobby,Lucas S
2:31
When I was running through the forrest it chased me to the edge of a cliff and I saw it the thing it had deep red eyes, grey fingernails as it tried to grab me I fell of the edge I thought that’s the end as a volcano erupted.A ball of lava hit the creature as it was falling down after me.
Lilymae and Piotr
2:31
The volcano felt hot and I could hear screams in the background cause they were running away.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:31
Bobby and Lucas - To make this even better, I think you could try to replace the word 'it' a few times if you can. That's a great ending!
Lydia and Nathan
2:31
Thank you Mr.Mitchell we appreciate it!
Bobby,Lucas S
2:35
When I was running through the forest the creature chased me to the edge of a cliff. Here you go Mr.Mitchell.
Lilymae and Piotr
2:35
Thank you for this lesson Mr Mitchell we really enjoyed it. thank
Ashleigh and Haydar
2:36
Thank  you for this lesson mr Mitchell
Lily-jo and Jessica
2:36
Thank you Mr.Mitchell for our lesson !
Harvey+Amelia:)
2:36
I really enjoyed the lesson Mr. Mitchell.
LucasM and John
2:39
Finally, after 123456789010 years, you have found the legendary ring volcano of life, intelligence and willpower. You walk into the cave as the volcano is erupting. You have burnt your hand and it has fallen of. Now you will live forever and be invincible! Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha…!
Lydia and Nathan
2:39
We really enjoyed this session,we hope you can come again!
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