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1:51

The motionless mist consumed the ruler - like, emerald trees.

Magdalena & Tiziano

1:51

The colossal lake casts the peculiar reflections of the tall trees.

Milly and Rebecca

1:51

it nearly gave me frostbite! We went outside I felt a shiver I new winter must be hear .

Tia and Bobby

1:51

The calm, freezing water slowly drifted to the lapis, blue ocean.

Rory and Lexi

1:51

The glooming mist was floating above the trees that were as black as midnight. The trees that were standing on top as the snow that was as white as the clouds in the bright sky.The calm, still water was drifting away.

David Mitchell

1:52

Great simile! Could you add a word before 'trees' in the second sentence?

Michaela and Aurelia

1:52

shivering in the clam sea, watched the ice couting

Isabella and Alex

1:52

The pearl snow was spread around the grass,green trees.

David Mitchell

1:52

Pearl or pearly?

Esther and Alice

1:52

The glistening, white snow covered the emerald, green trees

Tia and Bobby

1:53

The emerald, green trees, that was above my head, swayed in the wind.

David Mitchell

1:53

You could play with that sentence. What if you began with 'Above my head'?

Isabella and Alex

1:53

Pearl?

Maisie and Barnaby

1:53

Looking at the tall trees, they reflected on the calm lake.

Daisy B and Macy

1:53

The blinding mist slowly, took over me.

Lucas and Jake

1:53

The colossal, emerald trees slowly swayed side to side, blowing in the wind. In the gentle, freezing water, the shadows of trees shadowed along the lake. The blinding, misty sky glistened like heaven.

Daisy A and Harry

1:56

The shivering, straight trees grow as tall as a sky scraper.

Freya and Amelia

1:56

The everlasting banks contained the rippling water.

David Mitchell

1:57

I like that! It's making me thing the water wants to escape!

Milly and Rebecca

1:56

The silent waster that looked like lapis.

Isabella and Alex

1:57

As I looked up, I saw a huge blinding light surrounded by little lights.

Esther and Alice

1:57

The haunted house was surrounded by dry, crunchy grass.

David Mitchell

1:58

Try not to tell the reader that it is haunted. Describe it in a way that makes the reader think it might be haunted.

Rory and Lexi

1:58

The bushy trees that were standing on top as the snow that was as white as the clouds in the bright sky.

Daisy B and Macy

1:58

The intense fire burning in front of me, while the glistening stars shine above.

Michaela and Aurelia

1:58

In the midnight the haunted house began to fright.

Freya and Amelia

1:58

I never wanted to be here.

Tia and Bobby

1:58

I ran into the forest and found a haunted, fiery house. It looked like an old cottage.

Daisy A and Harry

1:58

Walking towards the house I can feel the heat burning my skin.

Freya and Amelia

2:00

I looked up and I saw the stars in the starry night.

Milly and Rebecca

2:01

A small thing that looked cottage that cracked in the wind.

Magdalena & Tiziano

2:02

Beautifully, the starts shone above our head. Along with the moon, they sparkled in the dark midnight sky. The tri coloured fire burst out of the windowless building as I slowly approached it. A shiver went through me. Suddenly, the fire calmed itself and a strange creeking noise came from the inside. The dry bushes and the dry grass crunched as I walked along the faded path. I heard a scream.

Daisy B and Macy

2:02

I stumbled past the house as I saw a fireball.

Isabella and Alex

2:03

I heard a terrifying scream. I don’t know we’re it came from!

Daisy B and Macy

2:03

I swallowed deeply, as the house turned to crisp.

Tia and Bobby

2:03

In the house, a pale figure was shivering and pointed at the corner where a wolf lay asleep with her pups.

Esther and Alice

2:03

The crooked, abandoned house that nobody stepped foot in stood in front of me looked old and warn out.

Daisy A and Harry

2:03

The house is a beast as melts the sky.

Grace&Antony

2:05

Above my head, I saw glinting stars, and fire as red as lava blasting out the chimney.I heard a deafening scream, suddenly, my heart was in my throat this was the game of life.

David Mitchell

2:07

Love the way you have started with 'Above my head'! How did that make you feel?

Connecting…

Daisy B and Macy

1:45

The calm, glistening water mirrrioring

Noah and Zac

1:52

The motionless mist consumed the ruler - like, emerald trees.

Michaela and Aurelia

1:53

the trees

Daisy A and Harry

2:01

The moon is glowing like no other thing.

Noah and Zac

2:01

As I walked up to this peculiar, petrifying house I heard my foot crush something it was a skull!

Isabella and Alex

2:01

As I crept towards the abandoned house it suddenly set on fire.

Maisie and Barnaby

2:01

As I walked across the crunchy grass I saw the scorching hot house burn to the ground

Freya and Amelia

2:03

I walked past the wheat field, I glanced at the moon and realised something was there. A haunted,scary house.

Daisy A and Harry

2:18

The girl dupery n

Daisy B and Macy

2:19

I took a dear breath

Daisy A and Harry

2:19

The girl ran away.Did she here us?

Tia and Bobby

2:25

The northern lights looked like emerald in the sky.

Isabella and Alex

2:25

Outside, in the sky there was the emerald, shiny lights !

Lucas and Jake

2:29

Then, the rat was gone. I had reached the end of the tunnel now and saw another cottage. It seemed more cute this time. Again, I heard the the bloodthirsty scream that I had heard in the other house. I walked towards the house, prepared for my destiny. Flick. The light went on. I had seen it..

Isabella and Alex

2:30

The snow covered the top of the little brown rusty cottage.

Tia and Bobby

2:30

creepy sniffing like a ghoul. Picking up her sharp, silver blade she turned around and chased us chanting her song.

Maisie and Barnaby

2:30

the northern lights lighting the sky above me, the world turned in to a magical place above me.