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Sacred Heart Year 5

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Lucas and Jake

2:05

Wandering through the dark, damp forest it began to rain. Suddenly, I saw a creepy cottage surrounded by dry, barren grass.The stars and the moon twinkled in the night sky.

Freya and Amelia

2:05

I looked through the window.I didn’t see anything but I heard a noise.

Milly and Rebecca

2:05

The wind crashed I got a shiver down my spine ! I took lots of deep breaths .

Michaela and Aurelia

2:06

one step forward just one but so crunchy I stared get the goosebumps, oh no I thought this gave me such a fright all night.

Isabella and Alex

2:07

As I set foot into the house the first thing is saw was my initials wrote in blood red!

David Mitchell

2:08

Was or were? Or would this work better?
As I set foot into the house, the first thing I saw... my initials in blood!

Daisy A and Harry

2:08

The room smelt like a damp dog had just ran inside

Milly and Rebecca

2:08

Inside the cottage I think it was a cottage I opened the door and saw this...

Daisy B and Macy

2:08

I opened the door to a surprise BATS! Flew at me.

David Mitchell

2:09

Did you hear something first? How did that make you feel?

Tia and Bobby

2:09

There was a sign that told me why the wolf’s were there it said: beware wolf pup raising grounds

Grace&Antony

2:09

It made the character feel threatened

Noah and Zac

2:09

I bravely stumbled across the doorstep I had strong nerves that terrified me so much I felt the world shake.

Esther and Alice

2:09

On the wall, I saw a warning it says if you ever come in you never see daylight again, it was written in blood.

Maisie and Barnaby

2:09

On the peeling wall, there was a sentence saying look out.

Daisy B and Macy

2:09

I walked in thud, plaster of the roof came down.I took a deep breath and smelt the burnt wood.

David Mitchell

2:10

Loving the word 'thud'! How did you feel smelling the burnt wood? Was it disgusting?

Isabella and Alex

2:09

As soon as I saw the words on the wall, a shiver down my spine.

Daisy A and Harry

2:10

When we walked inside the house the door slammed shut.

Grace&Antony

2:10

I kick the door down, inside looked looked like a

Michaela and Aurelia

2:13

Inside, what was I doing it was like I had no mind, just a handful of ashes witch was left behind.

Isabella and Alex

2:13

That shiver felt like a ghostly figure going through me.

Freya and Amelia

2:13

I walked inside the house,l peered down the hallway. I heard a chattering sound, I walked into the first room. There was a group of rats!

Daisy B and Macy

2:13

I opened the door squeak i could identify bats squeaking in the darkness of the burnt house

Magdalena & Tiziano

2:13

The fire disappeared and a shattering noise burst out from the house. There was a broken window on the left of the main view. The floor was dusty and creaky.There was a message written on the wall in blood. I approached it, but struggled to read it since there was no light. Except from the moonlight from the outside. I grabbed a torch from my pocket and shone it in the writing. You won’t want to know what it said...

David Mitchell

2:14

I love this! I want to know what it said!!!!

Milly and Rebecca

2:13

A person dead then the door slammed the person was gone...

Tia and Bobby

2:13

The pups were scared because people usually tried to kill them. Feeling brave, I told the wolves to not be afraid.

Michaela and Aurelia

2:14

Now, it is time to go home that’s enough fright for tonight, but what way

Rory and Lexi

2:14

I went inside, I couldn’t believe my eyes! All of a sudden my hands were shaking like never before I was scared. I went in the living room (I think) I didn’t know any more! The graffiti on the wall, the the ripped wallpaper...

David Mitchell

2:15

What happens to someone when they are scared?

Michaela and Aurelia

2:15

Now, it is time to go home that’s enough fright for tonight don’t you think

Lucas and Jake

2:15

As I tiptoes towards the house, I crouched down as I heard a defeating noise stinging my ears. As I entered the house, I had already regretted my decision.

Daisy A and Harry

2:15

When I touch the brick walls my hands immediately freeze.

David Mitchell

2:16

Freeze or froze?

Grace&Antony

2:16

I kick down the door when I looked throw it look like a murder scene and I saw the writing it was made from blood it said you’re next I would leave if you don’t want to die a painful, slow and horrible death.

Milly and Rebecca

2:16

We looked out the window she was running were was she going ...

Tia and Bobby

2:16

Then, my friend Tia came in to help me, for I was lost. The pale figure told me that a lion lived down the tunnel.

Daisy B and Macy

2:16

I walked further down the tunnel pit a patter water dripped down from above. Suddenly, I found a black figure in front of me still walking down. I got scared so I stayed still my heart kept beating but water dripped on me I got a shiver down my spine.

Isabella and Alex

2:16

A was a few minutes had passed I had already left the creepy house and was now walking through a tunnel WAIT! What was that .... A SMALL GHOSTLY figure stood in front of me, their back turned and blood red colour dripping of their hand.

Connecting…

Daisy B and Macy

1:45

The calm, glistening water mirrrioring

Noah and Zac

1:52

The motionless mist consumed the ruler - like, emerald trees.

Michaela and Aurelia

1:53

the trees

Daisy A and Harry

2:01

The moon is glowing like no other thing.

Noah and Zac

2:01

As I walked up to this peculiar, petrifying house I heard my foot crush something it was a skull!

Isabella and Alex

2:01

As I crept towards the abandoned house it suddenly set on fire.

Maisie and Barnaby

2:01

As I walked across the crunchy grass I saw the scorching hot house burn to the ground

Freya and Amelia

2:03

I walked past the wheat field, I glanced at the moon and realised something was there. A haunted,scary house.

Daisy A and Harry

2:18

The girl dupery n

Daisy B and Macy

2:19

I took a dear breath

Daisy A and Harry

2:19

The girl ran away.Did she here us?

Tia and Bobby

2:25

The northern lights looked like emerald in the sky.

Isabella and Alex

2:25

Outside, in the sky there was the emerald, shiny lights !

Lucas and Jake

2:29

Then, the rat was gone. I had reached the end of the tunnel now and saw another cottage. It seemed more cute this time. Again, I heard the the bloodthirsty scream that I had heard in the other house. I walked towards the house, prepared for my destiny. Flick. The light went on. I had seen it..

Isabella and Alex

2:30

The snow covered the top of the little brown rusty cottage.

Tia and Bobby

2:30

creepy sniffing like a ghoul. Picking up her sharp, silver blade she turned around and chased us chanting her song.

Maisie and Barnaby

2:30

the northern lights lighting the sky above me, the world turned in to a magical place above me.